Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/7/20, 4:54 AM
It was very sweet :) Would love to read more, but understand if you feel it has reached its conclusion.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 4:32 AM
This series is the best I've seen on this site in a long time and this story is the best in the series so far, love love love how dumb and hung and horny and dumb he got! Love the kinda reality change aspect too. Keep up the good work, bro!
5/7/20, 4:16 AM
Good work! I agree with the pacing concerns - but the overall the writing is great. Feels like this story has a lot of neat places it could go - for me I'm Jon doesn't stay under for too long; I really want to see them as rivals. And costumes!
Elm
5/7/20, 3:43 AM
He is so cute! hopefully we see some Orcs in this world of yours :)
5/7/20, 3:28 AM
Bro, this shit fucking slaps, bro.
5/7/20, 3:13 AM
Bro, you writin' another bro story, bro?
Rick
5/7/20, 2:09 AM
Loved this story, very hot. The mental images are very attractive, and I hope you will write more!
5/7/20, 1:09 AM
Loved it! Can't wait to see what's next!
5/7/20, 12:52 AM
I loved your writing in this chapter. It was a great story and you just let it flow so naturally. I wish there was a llttle more mind changing narrative. For example, they go from trying to leave from a kissing command, but accept the cock sucking homework just minutes later. Some steps as to what went on in their minds to accept the commands so readily. Just two cents...the story as is is A+
5/7/20, 12:17 AM
I like this and the possibilities it can offer. But Dad has a wife? That's disappointing. I'm speculating, but I would think his time at Astor would have eradicated that desire.