Recent Comments

5/7/20, 8:33 AM
I really loved the "call-and-response" scene towards the end with the new recruits. I felt like there were a couple of points where you got a little too caught up in the homage to Talmak's story, like that whole exchange about whether the BDU cost $45 or $60.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 8:10 AM
Awesome story! And i second Elm's comment, this site needs more Orcs
5/7/20, 8:07 AM
There's just nothing I could say to describe how hot, insanely well written and rather emotional this chapter was. Great fucking job man I will say, having butch blindfolded, handcuffed and calling a much younger and much smaller guy sir is definitely the highlight of this entire story which makes me realise how sad it is that Aaron is so damn vanilla.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 7:41 AM
I think the sad outweighed the horny for me :( Well written though.
HungryHungryHippo
5/7/20, 7:27 AM
yeah he needs to bottom or something to lose that nasty personality. Also Id rlly love some hardcore kinks. (BDSM, weight gain, adult baby, torture slut, whore transformation, incest, male lactation, etc) You've created this amazing app which can do anything and all hes doing is making muscle hunks, which is fine, but it would be really cool to see him do some major body modifications to some dudes. i just dont think you should limit yourself bby <3. but i do have to say that this idea, and the way you've developed it, is making me thirsting for more. these are rlly just some minor tweaks, the story is dope af already. keep up the good work!!! total 5star rating in all catagories from me babe <3!!!
Anonymous
5/7/20, 5:09 AM
Very hot! Looking forward to a part 2
Anonymous
5/7/20, 4:54 AM
It was very sweet :) Would love to read more, but understand if you feel it has reached its conclusion.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 4:32 AM
This series is the best I've seen on this site in a long time and this story is the best in the series so far, love love love how dumb and hung and horny and dumb he got! Love the kinda reality change aspect too. Keep up the good work, bro!
5/7/20, 4:16 AM
Good work! I agree with the pacing concerns - but the overall the writing is great. Feels like this story has a lot of neat places it could go - for me I'm Jon doesn't stay under for too long; I really want to see them as rivals. And costumes!
Elm
5/7/20, 3:43 AM
He is so cute! hopefully we see some Orcs in this world of yours :)