Recent Comments

5/7/20, 12:52 AM
I loved your writing in this chapter. It was a great story and you just let it flow so naturally. I wish there was a llttle more mind changing narrative. For example, they go from trying to leave from a kissing command, but accept the cock sucking homework just minutes later. Some steps as to what went on in their minds to accept the commands so readily. Just two cents...the story as is is A+
5/7/20, 12:17 AM
I like this and the possibilities it can offer. But Dad has a wife? That's disappointing. I'm speculating, but I would think his time at Astor would have eradicated that desire.
5/7/20, 12:09 AM
Well, nerd over jocks is my jam so of course I love this. Feet was put into the mix so even better. Keep it up! PS: The only thing this could get better if Damian goes for older people too <3
5/6/20, 11:13 PM
Now we're going to have a cop become a bro? Fuckin' awesome, bro!
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5/6/20, 10:44 PM
Definitely a different ending but loved it. Wish there was more transformations with the guys or the dorm mates but loved they story. Hope you can make some more soon.
5/6/20, 10:28 PM
Thank you for these sweet comments! *New Guy in Town* I absolutely love your feedback! and *ForgottenCradle* Don't worry! I am planning on having the older generation of students to play a role in some chapters haha. Though you probably have to be patient because it can maybe take a bit. So again! Thank you for the lovely comments! I absolutely love reading people's thoughts! Indicating what could be better or what you really enjoyed is a great help! Love y'all!
5/6/20, 10:03 PM
I hope somewhere down the line Travis' dad is visiting and remembering his time at school
5/6/20, 9:57 PM
Haha, yes; I'm glad you noticed! I kept their physical characteristics the same, but changed their ages and personalities to create unique characters.
5/6/20, 9:40 PM
You're a vignette writer, giving us snapshots of the academy; that's more an observation than a critique. This is the best vignette so far, definitely giving us a sense of how things work on the personal level and something to look forward to when Travis goes through the leadership class and when Travis becomes Alpha. Keep the story going, all these pieces will start to make an interesting larger picture.