Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/6/20, 10:44 PM
Definitely a different ending but loved it. Wish there was more transformations with the guys or the dorm mates but loved they story. Hope you can make some more soon.
5/6/20, 10:28 PM
Thank you for these sweet comments! *New Guy in Town* I absolutely love your feedback! and *ForgottenCradle* Don't worry! I am planning on having the older generation of students to play a role in some chapters haha. Though you probably have to be patient because it can maybe take a bit. So again! Thank you for the lovely comments! I absolutely love reading people's thoughts! Indicating what could be better or what you really enjoyed is a great help! Love y'all!
5/6/20, 10:03 PM
I hope somewhere down the line Travis' dad is visiting and remembering his time at school
5/6/20, 9:57 PM
Haha, yes; I'm glad you noticed! I kept their physical characteristics the same, but changed their ages and personalities to create unique characters.
5/6/20, 9:40 PM
You're a vignette writer, giving us snapshots of the academy; that's more an observation than a critique. This is the best vignette so far, definitely giving us a sense of how things work on the personal level and something to look forward to when Travis goes through the leadership class and when Travis becomes Alpha. Keep the story going, all these pieces will start to make an interesting larger picture.
Lusty Stallion
5/6/20, 9:24 PM
Thanks for the feedback. so he deserves some fucking with right?
Anonymous
5/6/20, 8:47 PM
another goodone
Mdlftr
5/6/20, 8:42 PM
Fascinating, well written story of muscle and sex initiated by a focus group - an original idea if I ever heard one! Well done!
Anonymous
5/6/20, 8:40 PM
I don't know but i feel this sequel a bit slow. Maybe it's just me wondering how this gonna end cause there still 4 chapters. I have a mix of feelings, I'd love that Todd wins, but at the same time i feel bad for Joe (he's my favorite from the first serie how innocent he is and his capture with the mind chess was hot but also painful) and Nathan (basically because the way he admires Joe makes me want him free of the mind control and reunited with his friend Joe even if its not in a romantic way). Maybe could be an end where Todd wins but Nathan and Joe gets free and run away from there MAYBE:(
mdlftr
5/6/20, 8:28 PM
The "dings" are signaling the changes - HOT! I love the changes as the MAYOR transforms into a real Alpha husband: "Parker goes to answer, but we both know his input isn’t as important as mine, so I cut him off by throwing him through the air onto the bed. “How about I just show you?” I growl."