Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/6/20, 1:34 PM
I'm just glad villains are winning. I'm so tired of sugar-coated endings.
5/6/20, 12:31 PM
i liked your story and hope you continue it. I like the idea from above about Noah eating James ass.
Jake
5/6/20, 12:23 PM
Thanks, I have been working on the next chapters as well as a few 3d images to insert to give a bit of a visual aid.
Dave Dastard
5/6/20, 12:14 PM
great work! love the subservience (the bowing and so forth). also love the foot worship. your story is very hot and a lot of fun. cant wait to read more, where I hope there's more sweaty foot action and lots of humiliation.
Anonymous
5/6/20, 11:31 AM
sweet and ti the point loved it . this format would make a great dad/son type transformation
Ken
5/6/20, 11:10 AM
I like it. It's got a good start. You could slow it down a little. Jake didn't put up any fight. It would've been nicer to see him struggle more. Kind of the same thing with Jon. Both of them trying to control the other. It went from 2 guys being bullied into either wanting to take over the world. I'd like to see more conflict and the dealings with each first. A very promising story though. Can't wait for the next chapters and see what you do.
5/6/20, 10:43 AM
unlike no homo or the Christmas music not following the throughline sometimes seems their bodies change But foremost like the mentality and robust full scenario. the office and their lives seem like a full enough environment with consequences. though this the most off instance of them getting on and no catching despite how insanely loud. Also wondering what is the program catch here? Zach himself? the phrase work wife? I like the drama between our three players. their change in mentality even hints at the environmental effects and rationalizations love the spiralling of events led so far. And yes closet and then office sex. zach's seeming change along with others. hmm. haven't heard from or of zach's wife as to Sterling or Tony's really interested how hr guy or the other ladies will take things. am curious why hr hasn't mentioned the reality enforcer or Sterling hasn't thought of it if only obliquely as a solution to his problems or his current actions as proof it was a waste ? will the affairs cool off for everyone as leave office? but no Sterling and Tony started up in the gym away from theirs argh it's porn, darmani, do not over think it...
Martin
5/6/20, 8:44 AM
I loved that series' premise. It's a nice idea and close enough to many of my own fantasies, which usually would put myself into Curtis' shoes. However, I'd also have preferred a more happy ending. I understand why you wrote that last chapter and the twist you wanted to tell. But honestly, I think that could have been done it a better, more sexy and interesting way. It doesn't really give credit to your whole series. In general, it's aways better to give the reader a good feeling at the end. I don't want to have a bad feeling after reading these stories, especially when the characters are given a personality you can relate to (which you excelled with). There would have been SO many options to create a twist while STILL giving the reader the feeling that both Greg and Curtis enjoy they're life - no matter in what way - than just leaving them hanging there with a pretended relationship bound to break up. That's really the worst outcome for me.
Moby
5/6/20, 6:14 AM
Well well. Lane might be taking a road he might not like. Too early to say anything, but I'm liking were this is going
Omegajock
5/6/20, 6:10 AM
This is awesome, I'm sure many of us have fantasized about using/being used by the hot jock roommate or guy next door. Looking forward to your future stories and chapters!