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5/5/20, 6:18 PM
This bleeping quarantine has forced most to stay at home. Using this free time, I went back to some of my other stories and, where I saw a sequel, I wrote one. I also added some chapters to installment series. I'll post in due course. I hope you enjoy!
5/5/20, 6:17 PM
This bleeping quarantine has forced most to stay at home. Using this free time, I went back to some of my other stories and, where I saw a sequel, I wrote one. I also added some chapters to installment series. I'll post in due course. I hope you enjoy!
5/5/20, 6:17 PM
This bleeping quarantine has forced most to stay at home. Using this free time, I went back to some of my other stories and, where I saw a sequel, I wrote one. I also added some chapters to installment series. I'll post in due course. I hope you enjoy!
5/5/20, 6:10 PM
This is an interesting entry, I'm getting "Giles from Buffy"-esque vibes from Professor Smith and Lorenzo. The style feels far more elegant and literary than most stories on this site. Keep up the good work.
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 5:16 PM
Thank youso much for the feedback. As I said I made this story for https://www.warpmymind.com/ and it only requires a 1000 words story so that's why it's so short. And yes I'm Mexican so I'm sorry for my bad writing skills 😅. I'll try to make a longer one next time
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 4:57 PM
Love this - the pup transformation and the use of the smell of his feet to control were so hot and I'm jealous of Mike lol. Just wish it was longer!
5/5/20, 4:21 PM
looking forward to reading more Simon the cop part!
May 4, 2020
Diz
5/5/20, 3:22 PM
Really enjoyed this! Not a foot fetishist myself but everything about the forced control, awareness and arousal control was great.
5/5/20, 1:23 PM
Hey boys! I've added 1275 words haha. I have used these words to introduce Travis's classmates (Though it may take a bit before the staff has reviewed the update of course). I hope you all enjoy it and that this addition helps make the class seem a bit more realistic!
Anonymous
5/5/20, 12:25 PM
I really enjoyed the story. loved the concept of the stem implant. Also, Curtis and Greg were well developed as was their dynamic. I know you are moving on and you have a neuro mate concept coming together but maybe the first chapter could revisit these guys? and then launch from there. Though I get why some might like a happy ending these are stories about enslavement and that concept seldomly goes hand in hand with happy endings, though it definitely can. I imagine greg buying a device that can measure electronic activity and discovering that Curtis is not at all decommissioned. the company discovering this. Greg struggling as Curtis puts him down. Waking in processing at the company with a vision of a naked Curtis, standing rigid and blank as a door slides open followed by a gurney holding the pesky attorney pushed by two uniformed expressionless workers and accompanied by Deidre. Then both Greg and Robert the attorney get pressed into neuro mate service. that's a slave's wishful thinking, lol.