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5/5/20, 6:39 PM
This just gets better with every chapter. I've never got so worked up reading and you leave us on a cliff edge which I know will blow me off whey the next chapter comes. I defo would pay for this. Great writing.
Swizzington
5/5/20, 6:24 PM
Just a minor point I noted at the very beginning that didn't strike me as realistic. I realize I'm nitpicking and it's not that important, but here goes: Why would a bunch of college students, at least one of whom is an art history major, be apathetic and bored at a museum? Whatever this class is, presumably it must be an elective. While I have no doubt one or two might be bored, you'd think most of them would be into that sort of thing, otherwise they never would have chosen the class to begin with. And in my experience, even if they weren't enjoying it, they would pretend they were to seem more intellectual, lol. And personally, I love museums and art galleries :D
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/5/20, 6:19 PM
We need an address to check this out ourselves.
5/5/20, 6:18 PM
This bleeping quarantine has forced most to stay at home. Using this free time, I went back to some of my other stories and, where I saw a sequel, I wrote one. I also added some chapters to installment series. I'll post in due course. I hope you enjoy!
5/5/20, 6:18 PM
This bleeping quarantine has forced most to stay at home. Using this free time, I went back to some of my other stories and, where I saw a sequel, I wrote one. I also added some chapters to installment series. I'll post in due course. I hope you enjoy!
5/5/20, 6:17 PM
This bleeping quarantine has forced most to stay at home. Using this free time, I went back to some of my other stories and, where I saw a sequel, I wrote one. I also added some chapters to installment series. I'll post in due course. I hope you enjoy!
5/5/20, 6:17 PM
This bleeping quarantine has forced most to stay at home. Using this free time, I went back to some of my other stories and, where I saw a sequel, I wrote one. I also added some chapters to installment series. I'll post in due course. I hope you enjoy!
5/5/20, 6:10 PM
This is an interesting entry, I'm getting "Giles from Buffy"-esque vibes from Professor Smith and Lorenzo. The style feels far more elegant and literary than most stories on this site. Keep up the good work.
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 5:16 PM
Thank youso much for the feedback. As I said I made this story for https://www.warpmymind.com/ and it only requires a 1000 words story so that's why it's so short. And yes I'm Mexican so I'm sorry for my bad writing skills 😅. I'll try to make a longer one next time
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 4:57 PM
Love this - the pup transformation and the use of the smell of his feet to control were so hot and I'm jealous of Mike lol. Just wish it was longer!