Recent Comments

7/4/25, 4:41 PM
I really hope you continue this story!
7/4/25, 2:53 PM
Great writing and level of detail with the characters. I was picturing the old Edgewater Beach Hotel in Chicago when I read your story.

7/4/25, 3:53 PM
@[muscle growth man](/user/show/10040653) Thank you so much! I will admit I have never been to Chicago so I love that you could visualise somewhere real based on my writing! Just googled the Edgewater Beach Hotel....that's actually pretty darn close to what was in my head!
7/4/25, 7:04 AM
This chapter should be included into here (don't know if was an error done on your part or you were just busy with posting other stories) - https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/35075?linear=false

7/4/25, 3:41 PM
@[4DaBoysOnly](/user/show/10040837) I've fixed this. Thx for noting this!
7/4/25, 3:01 PM
Great story. I love the forced tattooing.
Jul 2, 2025
7/3/25, 4:13 PM
Great story! Nice, short, and to the point. I also really like that you were so descriptive in what could be a very simple story - you took the time to describe Marco’s inner turmoil, how the men around him were acting, and his eventual surrender to the chanting and cock-drunk gooning bliss. I always appreciate when writers take the time to really explore the thoughts of their characters, and you did that very well here. I could almost imagine myself there next to Marco with my cock out and a vacant smile on my face, pump, pump, pumping it dumb, pump, pump, until I cum… 😉

7/4/25, 2:42 PM
@[el mexicano 4091](/user/show/2202935) That's such a lovely comment! Thank you!
7/3/25, 11:09 PM
I'm simultaneously turned on and sad...doesn't help that I'm dealing with a somewhat similar situation where someone I loved is now choosing someone I feel isn't right for him over me. But, like, this is so well written and emotional and hot at the same time. Kudos. Sincerely, you are very very talented.

7/4/25, 7:39 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Sorry to hear you're going through that. I hope, unlike this story, yours finds its way to a happier note. Thank you again for your comment. It means a great deal and inspires me to keep writing hard! If it's OK, I would like to reach out to you for some writing advice at some point in the future. I feel like I'm living a bit of a double-life right now and I'd love to know more about your writing process which might help me out!

7/4/25, 12:24 PM
@[Whisperlouder](/user/show/2186797) I’d be happy to chat! Feel free to reach out whenever 🥰
7/4/25, 11:42 AM
What a fun start! This kind of Drama is right up my alley. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Jul 2, 2025
7/4/25, 10:28 AM
Fuuuuuck bro, we need more stories like this out there, very nicely done. Think we can all agree too the world would be better like this.
Jul 2, 2025
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7/4/25, 10:20 AM
Wild ride, loved it. It's not often you get a real life villain as your villain in a story. Oh well. 4 trillion more in debt.
7/4/25, 6:37 AM
This is the first erotic superhero story I read and its always good to come back to. Thanks cicero!

7/4/25, 10:11 AM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) Ah thanks