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Anonymous
5/5/20, 12:25 PM
I really enjoyed the story. loved the concept of the stem implant. Also, Curtis and Greg were well developed as was their dynamic. I know you are moving on and you have a neuro mate concept coming together but maybe the first chapter could revisit these guys? and then launch from there. Though I get why some might like a happy ending these are stories about enslavement and that concept seldomly goes hand in hand with happy endings, though it definitely can. I imagine greg buying a device that can measure electronic activity and discovering that Curtis is not at all decommissioned. the company discovering this. Greg struggling as Curtis puts him down. Waking in processing at the company with a vision of a naked Curtis, standing rigid and blank as a door slides open followed by a gurney holding the pesky attorney pushed by two uniformed expressionless workers and accompanied by Deidre. Then both Greg and Robert the attorney get pressed into neuro mate service. that's a slave's wishful thinking, lol.
May 5, 2020
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/5/20, 11:01 AM
WMM is Warp My Mind
5/5/20, 10:20 AM
Agreed, he lacks the charisma needed to make a selfish protagonist likable, I hope he improves
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 10:08 AM
@sanchezinc 27 sir uwu
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 9:56 AM
A short one but pretty good; it has a few mistakes here and there but nothing that diminishes the great idea behind it, I wish it was longer tho Hope this is not the last we see from u; also what is WMM??? õ_o
5/5/20, 9:26 AM
Oh my! You are all so nice! I am adding to the class by making the students present themselves to the rest. I am currently writing it / thinking about what the students will look like! Thanks again for all the sweet messages. *New Guy in Town* you're an angel for helping! Thank you *Benv* and *Jockboy Joe* !!! I am really happy people are enjoying my writing! And *Kane Lerr*, I think a lot of us would love this academy haha. <3
RN
5/5/20, 9:20 AM
I love this series but this ather a sad ending.
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 9:07 AM
@Elito-pup,quizas yo te pueda ayudar. Que edad tienes cachorro? Great story, short but effective
5/5/20, 8:23 AM
@The Influencer I get that. From the moment I started reading this story I knew it won't be a happy ending.. I just never anticipated that it would leave me so heartbroken. The ethics prof who battles with the moral dilemma of having the opportunity to have the guy he longing for but can't help it to feel like he is betraying his autonomy as a human being when acting on it . I know you didn't put overly emphasis on the moral contradiction this is no ethics course after all but some part of me just hoped the love-mad professor and his drone-like pupil would have a… not happier but more fulfilling ending. But that's probably just the foolishly romantic side of me speaking. It was over all a exceptionally well written story and very pleasant to read. I was ably to sink into the story like I haven't been for quite some books I read. I hope you keep up the good work and won't be to mad at me for hoping/wishing for some kind of different ending.
5/5/20, 8:15 AM
One thing i hate about this story is how unlikable the protagonist is. I know the story is good for wank material only but evertime i read the protagonist's though process my dick deflates for how unlikably selfish he is. Ive read stories with the same premise with selfish unlikable characters but somehow colin manages to stand out for my wish for him to get hit by a truck. overall good wank material as long as it focuses on the anything other than the protagonist