Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/5/20, 12:54 AM
hmmmm i loved the dick shrinking aspect. to me it felt pretty in line with todds messed up brain. im sure there were as many people that liked it. i think you should probably concentrate on when people are being constructive about regarding what they would like to see next rather then what they didnt like previously. because and i cant stress this enough. you are never ever going to please everyone. all you can hope is that you make something that people respond to at all which clearly you have.
5/5/20, 12:51 AM
Wow this series is off to such a great start. I agree with New Guy in Town that the class could be drawn out longer. I love the fact that the students all have an awareness that something is awry.
5/5/20, 12:50 AM
Not gonna lie, but looking at that schedule made me want to enroll. Tuesday 9am for confidence and charisma? Sign me up!
Swizzington
5/5/20, 12:01 AM
I actually ended up taking the universal dick shrinking policy out of the epilogue. I heard from quite a few people that they didn't enjoy that one particular aspect and upon reflection, I agree. It didn't fit in with the rest of the environment I was trying to portray in that scene. It was kinda jarring and didn't make much sense. Currently, only 2 people have undergone the procedure: Shawn and Chester (poor guy can't catch a break!)
nycboot
5/4/20, 11:56 PM
Very good and hot story !!!
5/4/20, 11:47 PM
Loving this story as much as the first one. Quick question, does Todd not want to shrink the dicks of volunteers? And I assume it was meant to happen to Lane after meeting Dylan? Again, love all of your great works!
Swizzington
5/4/20, 11:23 PM
Thank you for your feedback. I have settled on the theme for the next mindscape scene. The next chapter will be up some time tomorrow (probably) :-)
5/4/20, 11:23 PM
Fantastic story line with all the details to make to most interesting and erotic to read. Really enjoyed you thoughtfulness and creativity. You make the characters come alive with all the details and frustrations that they endure. Found myself thinking about this story often as it was a leisurely read over a couple of days. Thanks!
Anonymous
5/4/20, 11:04 PM
lol i think im the only one on team todd. i didnt have a problem with his reign continuing however i do think you need to keep it creative as to how you mindcontrol new slaves. im not sure why you would say you dont feel like you can write sex stuff as you seemed to do a great job in the first series. the key i believe to an effective mindscape scene is using their fears or pride against them. the teacher turned into a sniveling student. the cocky brother turned into a chained up aware slave. these are what makes the scenes hot. take your time with them make sure the boys understand their fate but are unable to stop it. anyway looking forward to whatever you dream up next
5/4/20, 9:12 PM
I'm rooting for you and your story as a fellow up and coming writer, hence my comments. Glad I can be of some help.