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May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 8:11 AM
eres mexicano? ame tu historia ojalá un día encontrara un chico así en mi casa jaja xD
5/5/20, 7:14 AM
PS: I'm curious to know if that senator and that Aiden kid will play a bigger role in the upcoming resistance war. My guess is probably yes since they're probably set up there for a reason. I'm curious to know what kind of role they will play though.
5/5/20, 7:08 AM
I remember the first Slave Academy a few months back. I didn't know that a sequel was made. This is going well so far, I can't wait to read the rest of it. Please update soon!
5/5/20, 7:04 AM
I'm sorry I bummed you guys out. I didn't realize my readers were such hopeless romantics. :P I appreciated the comments (keep them coming please). I knew writing this story that it was going to be a mostly sad story. I think all the characters are complicated and not innocent, including Greg and Curtis. Everyone's motivation is questionable which leads to a lot of moral ambiguity. I think it would have felt cheap to write an ending where they end up together, given they should never have been together in the first place. I have a general idea for a series based in the same world, unrelated to the characters of Greg and Curtis (sorry, guys). It'll be a while before I write it, if at all. Admittedly, this last season of Westworld is too fresh in my mind and a lot of the concepts in my story are too similar for me to feel like I have an original idea. Maybe if I mull it over I'll feel better about it. I have other ideas in mind, and I think my next story will perhaps be a bit less melancholy than this one. Keep the feedback coming, it really helps. Even if I don't take it all in, having a sense of how my work is being received helps me to write more.
5/5/20, 5:52 AM
I would've hoped for a happier ending, but you are a great writer! Thanks for a interesting, well-written story.
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5/5/20, 5:30 AM
This is definitely one of the hottest stories I've read on Spiral! Bravo!
May 4, 2020
Anonymous
5/5/20, 3:09 AM
If you ever decide to write a sequel, I would be the first in line! Make Justin and his friends use each other's socks! Let them combine their foot sweat to each other! Also do sneaker fucking and sneaker sniffing! Those are sexy stuff
5/5/20, 3:00 AM
this is the end? but but.. it is so sad ._. will there ever be a sequel or a happy ending for them?
swngbthways
5/5/20, 2:59 AM
I LOVE IT! It's always nice to see characters who have inside struggles. definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
May 4, 2020
5/5/20, 2:58 AM
This is so hot. I love all the control he had over Justin <3 You know me, give me a nerd as a top and a jock as a bottom and I'm sold, plus, we had feet so even better :D I hope to see whose friend would come next... or the principal to teach him a lesson?