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Anonymous
5/5/20, 2:34 AM
That was a very sad ending. In my mind I hope Greg finds out about what they actually did and really sues them and wins. The ending is just soo twisted. I really loved the story and I hope you create a sequel to it or something like it. Well done.
5/5/20, 2:22 AM
I don't know how to feel about this story. On one hand, I'm heartbroken over this ending and I would rather Curtis and Greg have a happy ending. But I also find this ending incredibly interesting, and more than a little arousing. It's bittersweet, but I think a little too bitter for my tastes. Still, a wonderful job, and great writing all the way through.
5/5/20, 1:55 AM
Nice man. Got off to this first thing this morning.
May 4, 2020
5/5/20, 1:49 AM
Thanks for the nice comments! I always like to leave things open ended in case I ever come back to a story, or get an idea later. I did envision having some more of the guys getting controlled later down the road, but haven't had a chance to dig into that idea yet.
Anonymous
5/5/20, 1:45 AM
We miss you. Please come back soon!
Swizzington
5/5/20, 1:10 AM
Oh, I don't think I expressed myself clearly. It was not the people complaining about it that made me get rid of it. Their comments just made me take another look at it and then I made the decision for myself. When I read it over again, I just didn't like it. It wasn't working for me anymore. I learned the lesson not to bow to public pressure back in 2017 after I screwed up the final chapter of The Good Boy Handbook by trying to please everyone. Since then, I've been telling the stories exactly the way I want to tell them (sometimes for the better, sometimes for the worse, I have no doubt). While I do solicit ideas from people, and sometimes incorporate the ones I particularly like into my work, ultimately no one is influencing this story except me. If they were, the original Slave Academy would have ended very differently :-) When I made the decision to remove the dick shrinking part, I knew it would upset some people. It's far from an ideal situation, but the mistake - I believe - was in its initial inclusion, not in its later deletion. You are welcome to disagree!
Anonymous
5/5/20, 12:54 AM
hmmmm i loved the dick shrinking aspect. to me it felt pretty in line with todds messed up brain. im sure there were as many people that liked it. i think you should probably concentrate on when people are being constructive about regarding what they would like to see next rather then what they didnt like previously. because and i cant stress this enough. you are never ever going to please everyone. all you can hope is that you make something that people respond to at all which clearly you have.
5/5/20, 12:51 AM
Wow this series is off to such a great start. I agree with New Guy in Town that the class could be drawn out longer. I love the fact that the students all have an awareness that something is awry.
5/5/20, 12:50 AM
Not gonna lie, but looking at that schedule made me want to enroll. Tuesday 9am for confidence and charisma? Sign me up!
Swizzington
5/5/20, 12:01 AM
I actually ended up taking the universal dick shrinking policy out of the epilogue. I heard from quite a few people that they didn't enjoy that one particular aspect and upon reflection, I agree. It didn't fit in with the rest of the environment I was trying to portray in that scene. It was kinda jarring and didn't make much sense. Currently, only 2 people have undergone the procedure: Shawn and Chester (poor guy can't catch a break!)