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5/4/20, 5:47 PM
excellent start! can't wait to see what happens.
Anonymous
5/4/20, 5:43 PM
I'm hard!!!
nycboot
5/4/20, 5:33 PM
Wow! I don't recall many stories where the retribution feels so good to read. It's nice to know that some stories on here fulfill that sense. Thank you!
5/4/20, 5:22 PM
id love more details of sex, and describing how the bodies look and such.
5/4/20, 5:14 PM
Definitely like what you did with this chapter and the change in commands makes the story more engrossing. The problem with this chapter is it's a bit short for the amount of time that the class takes place. The class is a seminar style one, 3 hours long, but reading through this makes it seem like it's only a half-hour long. It's the first day so they might not use the full three hours, but it did seem to be rushed. The professor could have played with the students a bit more, taken his time making them aware of the triggers and the effects. Time didn't need to drag on, but definitely the pace needed to be slowed down more than it was.
5/4/20, 4:58 PM
You writing about me bro?
Anonymous
5/4/20, 4:26 PM
so hot bro!!!
Anonymous
5/4/20, 4:21 PM
one of the hottest stories ever!!!
Anonymous
5/4/20, 3:57 PM
that is one hot tail!!! really hope their is a follow up one day...
May 4, 2020
5/4/20, 1:58 PM
I agree with Kyle Chu... I loved this story, specially for the fact of Justin's changes and awareness. I also hope there will be a sequel where Justin (against his will) capture his friends and can't so anything about it (some alone and others like a puppet in the presence of Nate - commanding him)... And as well, I'd love to see the principal gets part of the punishment as well... he deserves it for the unfair he was with Nate (and I guess many other nerds as him while protecting the jocks) and also since he was a former jock I'm sure he was just like Justin. I don't know maybe even Nate could be generous and invite his friends to join him humiliating Justin and friends (or even give Justin's friends to his friends as gifts - since all nerd deserve a jock for his own). Please continue this story... I'm sure it will be a master piece!