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DiaperthisDaddy
5/4/20, 1:17 PM
This was hot! I want to see more of this. I love it when a young guy teases me. So seeing this made me hard and horny.
5/4/20, 1:09 PM
Such as great story, please have more!
5/4/20, 1:06 PM
Thank you for the hot sequel! This unit feels honored to have assisted. I love it! It is programmed to serve and assist.
Anonymous
5/4/20, 12:07 PM
Please more chapters!!
May 4, 2020
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/4/20, 11:18 AM
I wish that would happen to me please!
May 4, 2020
5/4/20, 6:51 AM
Love your stories as usual. I liked the mind control aspect, especially when Justin kept changing back and forth from mindless to aware, that was very hot. The story ended on a kind of cliffhanger so will there be a sequel? I sure hope so. Would love to see Justin's posse and maybe that unfair principal get whats coming to them. And as always, love the feet stuff!
May 4, 2020
5/4/20, 6:39 AM
it was amazing. you should continue it.
Anonymous
5/4/20, 6:20 AM
really interesting in concept and really hot in concept too, but some of the things you spend thousands and thousands of words on just sorta baffle me
5/4/20, 6:08 AM
Wow dude, this just got intense. It will come as no surprise to you that my favorite part was Dylan's subjugation. That was very well done and seriously very hot. You need to give yourself more credit, Swizz. I feel like that was one of your best brainwashing scenes actually. I was hesitant at first about Lane and his whole plot thread, but I'm pleasantly surprised that I love it and I'm sold to it. Lets see Todd, Lane, Dylan and Nathan (and maybe Chester) duke it out, lets go! Even though I have s preference on who I wanna win, I will support your ending no matter what. I like the whistle idea from MxHyp. It reminds me of the whistle guy from "How to take down a superhero" by baralai. As for my own suggestions for mindscape ideas, I have some "out there" ideas so please bear with me. So for one idea, I was thinking that maybe in the victim is submerged underwater in a sea of "brainwashing fluid" and as he tries to swim up to the surface, the entire top freezes, keeping him stuck down there below. Another idea I have is maybe "devolving" the victim's brain. Like maybe if the victim was like a smart person or something, in the mindscape he gets transformed into a primitive ape like version of himself where he just talks in a caveman like speech and his body is all hairy like a caveman. These are the only ideas i can come up with atm. If i think of anything more, I will send you a message!
5/4/20, 6:02 AM
Thanks for the feedback, greatly appreciated! This one is probably gonna continue with one or two more parts, hence why the plot is taking a turn to kinda tie it all out. Future stories will be a lil' shorter and a lil' more on the topic of the website.