Recent Comments

12/20/24, 3:55 PM
Such a great addition, Jack! I’m very excited to find out what happens next to Buck… AND his dad!
Tanner
12/20/24, 3:13 PM
I wonder where little Billy goes from here. Poor guy. His wife won’t be pleased. He might be better off without his bush so everyone could see his tiny penis in all its glory.
12/20/24, 2:33 PM
i love when his hot breath was close to his face... omgosh...i love your writing. Where can i read more and more of your stories.?
Tanner
12/20/24, 2:25 PM
So good!!!
12/20/24, 2:03 PM
WOW! That was just so exciting. The green eyes... the references to the smells of men... the blonde hair providing influence on the boy... WHAT A GREAT STORY. Thank you
Dec 20, 2024
12/20/24, 9:02 AM
Hot, love the writing.

Pcm
12/20/24, 10:24 AM
@Flamefox23 Thank you!
5/21/23, 9:52 PM
The concept's good, and the writing's good. It feels a bit rushed though. I hope we see more from you, and I hope it's a bit more drawn out. Just so you can really get into the groove of these changes.

Majin Charles
5/21/23, 10:18 PM
@[Lancelot](/user/show/127419) really appreciate the criticism, i definitely agree in hindsight! there's a lot more i could've (and should've) gotten into... there's always next time, i suppose. shall definitely be posting more, thanks!

12/20/24, 8:26 AM
@Majin Charles Well, I swooped back around. Still love the concept and the writing. Kinda sad to see nothing more ever cropped up here from you. Really hoping that someday changes. Or you mention if you're posting somewhere else.
12/20/24, 4:17 AM
A bittersweet ending. Coal is defeated , but Grey is going back with him to their planet. I hope there was a way for the two of them being together. Oh well
Dec 20, 2024
12/20/24, 2:53 AM
Its frickin bats! I love halloween :)

Pcm
12/20/24, 3:46 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) Im a month and a half too late for halloween, it seemes. Well, at this rate, both of the boys will become real bats soon enough.

12/20/24, 3:55 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Haha, no worries! Love this quote and thought it was appropriate. Great story!

Pcm
12/20/24, 4:13 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) Thank you!
12/20/24, 4:11 AM
Wow. What an incredibly hot story. Cum control/orgasm denial/edging and cock and ball torture are my two biggest kinks, so this story was right up my alley. Having one's cock and balls removed but still able to feel everything that is done to them has been a recurring fantasy for many years. And you tell the story so well. I love the addition of the one set of equipment that is felt by all 17 of them simultaneously, _especially_ with the addition that each of them is stimulated as intensely as the most sensitive guy for that particular sensation. I agree with others that I would love to see more of the torment; both of the individual men and each separate activity. And I'd enjoy seeing how Mr. Wynne breaks them down with increasing torments and tortures over the six weeks. (I especially love hearing and seeing guys' extreme horniness and inability to handle a lack of orgasm in the face of constant sexual stimulation.) I'm curious about their naked masturbatory serenade of the women's dorm on Halloween night. It looks like they all had their junk back by then, but they were still forced to do that somehow. Was that a magical compulsion that Mr. Wynne had given them prior to giving them their cocks and balls back? (I assume his connection to them would end when he didn't have their equipment anymore.) Or was it some other form of control that forced them to jack off? It seems magical, since they all came simultaneously. Well done. I'll be fapping to this story **a lot** in the weeks and years to come.