I must say this is something I was expecting from the moment Lane took Chester glasses... but I love it... now we can see a real resistance to Todd power over the academy. It took me by surprise that Dylan come back to his old self/attitude... but I love him more that way :3 I wonder of Lane will fight for freedom or will try to take advantage of this 🤔 and about suggestions... i guess the next mindscape should be Chester... and I think we didn't see it in the previous arc, so maybe something computer based for his mindscape? him been a genius I only think about that or some kind of laboratory for his mind... It will be a long wait for Tuesday, but I will be patient 💙💙💙💙

nothing beats the chess mindscape with joe. still my favorite.

I submitted another chapter and I will work on more if people like it. I am not sure if I did it correctly. but hopefully it will be added soon.

Very nice~ Tech beating magic (or telepathy) Also, fun to have old Dylan back. This is going really well so far

I was trying to write it as a "this might be the end or not" sort of thing. The ring might be gone or it might not be. No one knows.

Hope this continues on!

Hello MxHyp. Thank you for your detailed feedback! I agree that it is a little unreasonable to ask for mindscape ideas when the participants are unknown. I did think about that, but didn't want to reveal spoilers. :-) Your ideas are very interesting though and will be taken into consideration!

Well first thing CONGRATULATIONS... what a twist! I knew Lane would play an important role to defeat Todd but now I can imagine how. Maybe the resistance turns into a revolution and Lane intends to take the control of the school with the help of Dylan. Since he figured out that the glasses play an important role he will make sure Dylan get a new pair and will start controlling more students or teachers (he may start with Aiden and/or his father ( I'd like to be the father cause i have a fetish of young people controlling old one - but I'd also like to see Mitch or a coach converted instead), then he will convert maybe Joe (i'd also want to see Joe character in a mindscape back how he used to be so sweet, innocent ). I don't know... seriously there's and open door here to do many things as a new villain (with more hearth than Todd that its more romantic but still a controller) Honestly I would like an ending where someone (Todd, Lane, Chester, Dylan or Nathan) keep the control of the school since i like how twist that is; i wouldn't like to set everybody free (although I'd like to see Nathan and Joe together somehow). And about the ideas for the mindscape... since i dont know who would be involved i can't come with a particular idea cause i like that the methods use are somehow related to the persons... i just have two ideas (specifics - that can be modified) and two more simply. the first and more cliche for jocks and coaches would be a whistle and the figure of the new coach to obey. The second (like the mind chess) would be like to empty a piggy bank or a jug with all what the person believe or is important for him and start implanting new thoughts in it again (if its a piggy bank would be great to be in rich people like Aiden or his father). The other two could be trough eating (lollipop or something else) the more he eats the more commands he acquires. Or a pool that starts to fill (but the water is a brain washer instead) he is worried but as soon as the "water" touch him he start to get relax, but still aware of the commands until the very end when the pool is filled and you can see him floating (and letting his mind float since he doesnt need to think by himself anymore). Sorry for the long text (and the possible faults - that i hope they didnt cause problems to understand me - since english is not my first language). Really looking forward to read you soon:)

Loving this! Can't wait to see it really get dirty...

This is incredible! I can't wait to read the next installment.