Hope this continues on!

Hello MxHyp. Thank you for your detailed feedback! I agree that it is a little unreasonable to ask for mindscape ideas when the participants are unknown. I did think about that, but didn't want to reveal spoilers. :-) Your ideas are very interesting though and will be taken into consideration!

Well first thing CONGRATULATIONS... what a twist! I knew Lane would play an important role to defeat Todd but now I can imagine how. Maybe the resistance turns into a revolution and Lane intends to take the control of the school with the help of Dylan. Since he figured out that the glasses play an important role he will make sure Dylan get a new pair and will start controlling more students or teachers (he may start with Aiden and/or his father ( I'd like to be the father cause i have a fetish of young people controlling old one - but I'd also like to see Mitch or a coach converted instead), then he will convert maybe Joe (i'd also want to see Joe character in a mindscape back how he used to be so sweet, innocent ). I don't know... seriously there's and open door here to do many things as a new villain (with more hearth than Todd that its more romantic but still a controller) Honestly I would like an ending where someone (Todd, Lane, Chester, Dylan or Nathan) keep the control of the school since i like how twist that is; i wouldn't like to set everybody free (although I'd like to see Nathan and Joe together somehow). And about the ideas for the mindscape... since i dont know who would be involved i can't come with a particular idea cause i like that the methods use are somehow related to the persons... i just have two ideas (specifics - that can be modified) and two more simply. the first and more cliche for jocks and coaches would be a whistle and the figure of the new coach to obey. The second (like the mind chess) would be like to empty a piggy bank or a jug with all what the person believe or is important for him and start implanting new thoughts in it again (if its a piggy bank would be great to be in rich people like Aiden or his father). The other two could be trough eating (lollipop or something else) the more he eats the more commands he acquires. Or a pool that starts to fill (but the water is a brain washer instead) he is worried but as soon as the "water" touch him he start to get relax, but still aware of the commands until the very end when the pool is filled and you can see him floating (and letting his mind float since he doesnt need to think by himself anymore). Sorry for the long text (and the possible faults - that i hope they didnt cause problems to understand me - since english is not my first language). Really looking forward to read you soon:)

Loving this! Can't wait to see it really get dirty...

This is incredible! I can't wait to read the next installment.

Thanks for pointing that out Udems! I didn't realize the formatting didn't properly convert when I brought it over from Google Docs. I've edited it now so hopefully the different perspectives are more clear.

Must say, I was very nervous that this seemed to be a festival of Todd's evil doings. But I'm very pleased I haven't stopped reading and managed to keep the stomach to read this awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

The writing could use more space between actions and who is talking, to give the reader more tools to understand who is talking and who's POV is on. Other than that, nice!

nice concept for the story

Thanks for comment, everyone! This story is based on a video about those straight guys support their families by gay porn production. I'm sorry for my lack of logic pp. At first I wanna write a story about the protagonist is a mysterious creature that he can spread the lust and desire. TBH the Adam should be struggling with the love or lust, family or body. Unfortunately I was really exhausted and depressed when I translated it to English. I apologize for my inpatient. Sorry pals. Maybe I will edit this series one day.*wink