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5/4/20, 2:12 AM
Must say, I was very nervous that this seemed to be a festival of Todd's evil doings. But I'm very pleased I haven't stopped reading and managed to keep the stomach to read this awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
5/4/20, 2:07 AM
The writing could use more space between actions and who is talking, to give the reader more tools to understand who is talking and who's POV is on. Other than that, nice!
5/4/20, 2:06 AM
nice concept for the story
5/4/20, 1:56 AM
Thanks for comment, everyone! This story is based on a video about those straight guys support their families by gay porn production. I'm sorry for my lack of logic pp. At first I wanna write a story about the protagonist is a mysterious creature that he can spread the lust and desire. TBH the Adam should be struggling with the love or lust, family or body. Unfortunately I was really exhausted and depressed when I translated it to English. I apologize for my inpatient. Sorry pals. Maybe I will edit this series one day.*wink
Anonymous
5/4/20, 1:34 AM
Great story!! There is a great potential here thanks to collective wisdom. Anyway, I wish to have that cup ;)
5/4/20, 12:29 AM
Wow! I knew those glasses were going to be important, but who would have thought they could override telepaths? This is a game-changer for sure! But take all the time you need to write a new chapter, Swizzington. You're amazing, and we'll wait for it! :)
5/4/20, 12:23 AM
Wow!!! And how is this chapter for all you who were complaining about the predictability???!!!! Forgot about the glasses and this is what happens; Swizzington comes through with a major swerve and changes things. Thank you, Swizzington for your work so far; I can appreciate the breaking a chapter because of length and I can sympathize with you with the criticism that can come with your work. I'm loving this leg of the story and will wholeheartedly encourage you to keep going. I'm looking forward to the next part!!! (Let your fans know how we can help you keep things going!!)
Swizzington
5/4/20, 12:21 AM
Glad you guys are enjoying it :-) Fair warning: As I will be writing half the next chapter from scratch, there may be a small delay. I'm aiming for Tuesday but I can't be sure. First I have to think of a 'mindscape' theme worth writing about (good ideas are hard to come up with!).
Anonymous
5/4/20, 12:12 AM
Looking forward to reading more! The updates have been so awesome!!
Anonymous
5/4/20, 12:05 AM
Ok here we go. This is what I was expecting from the series. Although I do suspect things will go wrong and Todd will end up back in control. At least we have some conflict/some resistance to it all.