Recent Comments

5/3/20, 6:33 PM
I have changed the triggers because I agreed with *New Guy In Town*'s point about the triggers not fitting with the setting of the story. "Bad boy" has become "penalty", "Good boy" is now "Glory", "Bitch boy" has been changed into "Omega", and "Slut Boy" has been replaced by "Alpha." To make sure everyone is aware I am using a trigger I decided to use italics. If someone has any thoughts/opinions on this, I would love to hear them!
5/3/20, 6:14 PM
Hey New Guy in Town, I think your point about the triggers is valid! I will think about maybe changing them! I liked the repetition of "boy" to make sure that it was very obvious when a trigger was being used. However, you're right about it being rather childish and/or not sophisticated!
5/3/20, 6:04 PM
I generally like the idea, but bitch boy and slut boy as triggers seems out of place for the air of sophistication the Academy is supposed to have. Equally good boy and bad boy seem a bit too childish for the atmosphere of this Academy. If the Greek and Roman idea is at work it should be reflected in the triggers.
5/3/20, 5:17 PM
Love it! Can't believe it's back already!
Swizzington
5/3/20, 5:10 PM
Thank you to everyone for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate that so many people are invested in the story ! I intend to have the next chapter up later today. While the story is already written, I like to go back over each part and fine-tune them just before I publish, and that is what I will be doing with Chapter 4 this afternoon :-)
Dave Dastard
5/3/20, 4:25 PM
just popping in to say how much I love the series. the plot's intriguing to me. i actually think Todd is sexy so I like the dynamic of him potentially winning as the villain. his humiliating tactics are so great (for example, I love all the curtsying and bowing). thanks for putting in the hard work of layering the story with so many characters and hypnotic take downs, Swizz. you're the best. please dont make me wait too long refreshing this page to see when a new one's posted. lol.
5/3/20, 3:57 PM
hot apart from the weird 'seminal organ' just seems silly to me
Anonymous
5/3/20, 3:13 PM
I just want to say that i LOVE this story... it's my favorite one, although I like stories with happy endings, i find this really hot for many reasons: the hypno techniques, the concept of controlling a school, young controlling olders, nerd controlling jocks, the uniforms, and many twists it has and Todd always manage to keep control. Personally, I'd like Todd keep total control of the school, or maybe even expand his reign to the town (with the entire town as volunteers):)
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/3/20, 2:44 PM
Sounds more like pleasure than punishment to me. What is name of this college, so I can get same treatment?
Anonymous
5/3/20, 2:01 PM
I think we also need to remember one thing, it's not that series. It's a bit of fun, some people are going to like it, others aren't. That's fine. The people who don't like don't need to read it or leave hateful comments, the people who do like it can carry on reading and leave constructive comments. It's just a bit of fun