Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/3/20, 3:13 PM
I just want to say that i LOVE this story... it's my favorite one, although I like stories with happy endings, i find this really hot for many reasons: the hypno techniques, the concept of controlling a school, young controlling olders, nerd controlling jocks, the uniforms, and many twists it has and Todd always manage to keep control. Personally, I'd like Todd keep total control of the school, or maybe even expand his reign to the town (with the entire town as volunteers):)
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/3/20, 2:44 PM
Sounds more like pleasure than punishment to me. What is name of this college, so I can get same treatment?
Anonymous
5/3/20, 2:01 PM
I think we also need to remember one thing, it's not that series. It's a bit of fun, some people are going to like it, others aren't. That's fine. The people who don't like don't need to read it or leave hateful comments, the people who do like it can carry on reading and leave constructive comments. It's just a bit of fun
nycboot
5/3/20, 1:41 PM
Ky'Ro - seems like you missed my point - I wasn't talking about the plot specifically but about techniques of writing. I'm reminded of an aphorism that is often applied to Hollywood film production: "**Keep on repeating it until it doesn't make money**."
5/3/20, 12:17 PM
Please post more really enjoyed this!
5/3/20, 12:08 PM
Marvelous! Fantastic idea, excellent characters and beautifully written! Bravo! More please!
Anonymous
5/3/20, 9:59 AM
The one that gets attached is the one that feels the pain. I afraid things may not end well for Greg.
5/3/20, 9:47 AM
I adore this one!
5/3/20, 9:11 AM
Good writing, but Todd is too annoying to make me like this story.
5/3/20, 8:37 AM
Amazing as always! Can't wait to read more! I actually wouldn't mind seeing Jeff getting fucked by Carl but I want him to get into the frat so he can be Biff's little brother so Biff can fuck him a lot!