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Anonymous
5/3/20, 2:01 PM
I think we also need to remember one thing, it's not that series. It's a bit of fun, some people are going to like it, others aren't. That's fine. The people who don't like don't need to read it or leave hateful comments, the people who do like it can carry on reading and leave constructive comments. It's just a bit of fun
nycboot
5/3/20, 1:41 PM
Ky'Ro - seems like you missed my point - I wasn't talking about the plot specifically but about techniques of writing. I'm reminded of an aphorism that is often applied to Hollywood film production: "**Keep on repeating it until it doesn't make money**."
5/3/20, 12:17 PM
Please post more really enjoyed this!
5/3/20, 12:08 PM
Marvelous! Fantastic idea, excellent characters and beautifully written! Bravo! More please!
Anonymous
5/3/20, 9:59 AM
The one that gets attached is the one that feels the pain. I afraid things may not end well for Greg.
5/3/20, 9:47 AM
I adore this one!
5/3/20, 9:11 AM
Good writing, but Todd is too annoying to make me like this story.
5/3/20, 8:37 AM
Amazing as always! Can't wait to read more! I actually wouldn't mind seeing Jeff getting fucked by Carl but I want him to get into the frat so he can be Biff's little brother so Biff can fuck him a lot!
5/3/20, 8:31 AM
Anonymous you're fair to your opinion however this wasn't slapped together. Also the original story was first thought up to be a happy ending story but decided against it. This story has also gone through many rewrites at least 4 and given that this is a different story from any of those. Though I've read this like 8 times before being posted this is like reading a new story. Not to mention he's bounces ideas around like crazy trying nail it perfectly with it still making since. Plus this isn't the end of the story can't defeat him at the beginning of the story. Then there is no story.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/3/20, 7:41 AM
Such fun things always happen in locker rooms, guess that is why I have a jock kink