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5/3/20, 12:17 PM
Please post more really enjoyed this!
5/3/20, 12:08 PM
Marvelous! Fantastic idea, excellent characters and beautifully written! Bravo! More please!
Anonymous
5/3/20, 9:59 AM
The one that gets attached is the one that feels the pain. I afraid things may not end well for Greg.
5/3/20, 9:47 AM
I adore this one!
5/3/20, 9:11 AM
Good writing, but Todd is too annoying to make me like this story.
5/3/20, 8:37 AM
Amazing as always! Can't wait to read more! I actually wouldn't mind seeing Jeff getting fucked by Carl but I want him to get into the frat so he can be Biff's little brother so Biff can fuck him a lot!
5/3/20, 8:31 AM
Anonymous you're fair to your opinion however this wasn't slapped together. Also the original story was first thought up to be a happy ending story but decided against it. This story has also gone through many rewrites at least 4 and given that this is a different story from any of those. Though I've read this like 8 times before being posted this is like reading a new story. Not to mention he's bounces ideas around like crazy trying nail it perfectly with it still making since. Plus this isn't the end of the story can't defeat him at the beginning of the story. Then there is no story.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/3/20, 7:41 AM
Such fun things always happen in locker rooms, guess that is why I have a jock kink
Ben
5/3/20, 7:23 AM
Lots of comments regarding Todd always wins and no plot twists - I think an important detail to remember is that this was written after the ending but takes place before the ending. There is only so much that can happen and I certainly went in knowing that Todd was gana carry on winning and I'm completely happy with that. I feel we should have all gone into this knowing that Todd wasn't going to be overthrown, knowing that joey wasn't going to escape because we all have read what has happened. There have been some obstructions that Todd has overcome and I definitely think more are coming, which is going to be fun! The above dosent make the story bad at all, but it does make it a bit more predictable, which is fine and again there is only so much that can happen! I am really enjoying it, I was looking forward to Chesters mindsweep but I completely understand your reasoning behind it swizz. Equally my favourite sections are these parts so I enjoy what you did with drew, even if it was relatively short. My favourite of old time had to be with Jimmy! Please do keep writing!
Anonymous
5/3/20, 7:06 AM
Okay the star wars franchise is a whole discussion in itself and that franchise exists mostly because disney wants to milk money off it. I get your point that regarding the story needing to move somewhere. But for me, if hypothetically this story ends with Todd still in power, it doesn't mean that the series didn't go anywhere, we got to see what happens along the way. His entire regime can still change, he might lose allies like Nathan or something. It might cost him something to gain the win, like Chester or something. Who knows what might happen. But I dont thin the first three chapters of the story are just rehash of the last series because the dynamics are way different. In the first one, it was about Todd increasing his army of allies and in this current series its about him maintaining his empire. Whether he can keep it intact is the mystery. So far though, its been shown that his regime is not as iron clad as it seems, so we'll see how he adapts.