Hi its Anonymous again! Thank you nycboot you understand what I mean! Everything has already been built up in the first story. There is no reason to keep on doing the same thing over again and pounding into our heads that Todd is the ruler, Todd will always win. It just does not make for a good story. Another thing I want to say is, any good sequel has something to say or has a purpose to exist. Currently this sequel has not said anything that is meaningful to advance the plot from what we already know of. Yes Chester tried to do something but it failed. The foreshadowing of Lane getting enslaved is soo crystal clear. Theres nothing exciting anymore about the story. Ultimately I know what is going to happen, Todd is going to win in the end like usual and things will go on like normal. He just keeps on building tension and it is going nowhere. I guess time will only tell what will happen.

I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes :)

great story, will this be a series??? I hope so!

Yall where stacy at. she HAS to learn about Pines powers and also nice chapter

How the things improve more and more, I don't know how this is possible. You is a incredible writer. The pace and all the scenes and dialogues are so organic, that I can be excitedseveral times and still really enjoy the story. Giving your audience the right sensations is what makes a great writer, which you definitely are. Congratulations.

I love how we get to see more of what life is with Todd. I dont know why some people seem to hate this. I would love to see them try anything better. My faveroite parts have to be the call back to mitch as the butler, always loved the idea behind mitch. Also love how we arre seeing what life is like with todd now in control since it is called slave academy. cant wait for the next part.

This is a great story, and while i enjoyed it, i can't help but feel that Greg is being kinda a stalker and that he won't have a happy ending, which is a pity. thanks for the constant updates

Great idea - a bit on the fast side, but very intriguing. Are you going to write further installments?

💙💙💙💙💙 I love it, your work is always amazing!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter :3

nycboot, I think it is a little premature to judge the WHOLE story. Swizzington has proved again and again that he can manipulate the plot in surprising ways--again, there was a genuine debate in Chapter 9 of "Slave Academy's" comment section about what the ending would be, and the ending of "How to be a Good Boy" had a ton of surprises (the father resisting control, and almost winning, then losing--and then the psychiatrist's son turning the tables with his subdermal protection unit, for example). As for the "too many enslavements," we've really only seen three in the story so far: Jasper's, Drew's "realignment," and Chester's, and of those two, we only got a full picture of Drew's. I think it is an important bit of worldbuilding to show just how powerful Todd has become. Another important "golden rule" among creatives is **show, don't tell.** If Swizzington wrote "Todd enslaved everyone who came his way," and only focused on Lane (who I guess will be the main character of the story), we would complain that it was not realistic. By showing us the extent of Todd's powers, we understand the stakes. Worldbuilding is an important part of the plot! I agree with you that Todd is a horrible little jerk, and I'm hoping he gets blown up by a land mine, personally. :p But I have also really enjoyed seeing the picture of a changing world--the kind of "natural progression" of a powerful mind controller. So many of the stories on this site fall into two categories--the aftermath of a world of mind control (Hypnothrill is the king of that, for example, and dear Wesley Bracken's alternate worlds are gorgeous), or a quick beginning and ending of the process (I think of Willie Cici and Derek Williams as masters of that trope). I think Swizzington is doing something really cool by showing us the "in-between": a world in the middle of its transformation, moving from one model of lifestyle to another. Swizzington is free to write what he wants, and that means we are free to read what we want. :D I hope that he continues to write this story!