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Pink crystals
5/2/20, 10:47 PM
please continue! let the doctor milk him.
5/2/20, 10:41 PM
Now to my actual thoughts on this story, the biggest highlights for me are: a) the mindscape scene with Drew. I love the whole self inducing reprogramming that Nathan dis to him. b) Quincy's little outburst during the play intermission was hot as hell and I enjoyed how many people subdued him right away. c.) The play itself was very fun and it shows great characterization for Todd and how egotistical he really is. This is my fave chapter of the sequel so far. Now if i was to give ACTUAL criticism, i feel kinda cheated and miffed that we missed Chester's mindscape yet again! We never saw his conversion on the original Slave Academy and we are not seeing it again here! Also, I find it kinda odd that Mike was not among the audience in this chapter. I thought he was meant to be Todds bodyguard. Other than that, I still love this series tho, dont get me wrong on that!
5/2/20, 10:35 PM
To the anonymous commenter, I guess if your purpose for reading this story is to read a plot full of twist and turns in the story then I guess you wont be having a goid time. But as a fan of the previous Slave Academy series, I am thorougly enjoying these chapters, especially this one. In my opinion, I feel like this sequel was written primarily to give us a glimpse on how Todd's world order looks like after he won on thr previous series. And I think Swizz has done a tremendously commendable job at doing that as he fabricated a very detailed story on how Todd Cove Academy functions after his rule had been cemented. On top of that, the whole development with the Lane character has also been interesting as well since he is an adversary that Todd does not see coming. So in conclusion, its not fair to say that Swizz can't write a "well thought out story" when the evidence points to the contrary. Just because it doesnt fit the criterias youre looking for in a story doesn't mean its bad. So please don't throw such harsh comments to an author who doesn't deserve it, especially to someone who works as hard to provide stories on this site as Swizz
Swizzington
5/2/20, 10:13 PM
Buffy67, it depends what you mean by sex. Full on anal intercourse between two men? 'Fraid not. There will be some dick sucking and some anal penetration, but not a whole lot. Like the original Slave Academy, I'm not really focusing on sex here. I'm not good at writing sex scenes and I don't particularly enjoy writing them either :-)
Swizzington
5/2/20, 10:09 PM
@anonymous poster above 'New Guy in Town': Yeah, I agree the mindscapes have the most potential for hotness and excitement. And coming into this story, I knew I had written myself into a little bit of a corner with Todd's power loss, because it was his sadistic nature that led to those scenes being so different. He wanted to come up with new, innovative ways to torture and enslave people. Dylan and Nathan on the other hand, the ones now making the slaves, are of course also enthralled themselves, so it's reasonable to expect that their methods of control are more efficient and pragmatic. They aren't doing it for pleasure, like Todd was. With that being said, we will see several more mindscape scenes throughout the story, and hopefully you will enjoy some of them :-) @everyone else commenting here: Thank you for your support! I am glad to see so many people interested and enjoying the story. :-)
5/2/20, 9:49 PM
Thank you to all three writers for writing a really nice story; it's really cool to see this type of collaboration. Maybe this could be the basis of a writing contest. But it was really enjoyable to see the story advance through different styles and techniques. Please do this again if you all have the time.
5/2/20, 9:41 PM
man i need more of this asap. your a creative writer thanks :)
5/2/20, 9:34 PM
@Swizzington: Another great chapter of the story; looking forward to the next part. @Anonymous: I don't think you understand what this chapter does to advance the story. In this chapter we have three potential threats to Todd's dominion. First is Chester's plan; while Todd makes Chester into a drone it can be undone with a pair of glasses in the very residence where Todd resides. So a threat to Todd lies in the very building he occupies and rules things from. Second is Drew; much like Chester, Drew has been brought back under Todd's control and yet there is the chance that he might remember Chester's warning and carry out Chester's plan. Finally, Quincy reveals that the glasses are the key to maintaining Todd's control. Nathan and Dylan can create the prisons that make a person Todd slave, but the glasses are the actual means of keeping someone in that prison. We thought that might be the case when Drew's glasses were broken but now we see a clear example of it in Quincy. So we have three potential threats plus, as Feed Your Head points out, Lane and his undercover investigation. So threats abound to Todd and his reign, the ones he sees seem to have been put down but have not really gone away. And he hasn't met Lane yet. So like Moose says, there can't be a resistance right out the gate; it has to be built and build itself up.
Anonymous
5/2/20, 9:32 PM
swizz your story is great. your writing is fantastic. and while the way you tell your story may not be the exact way i or someone else would picture or would have chosen thats the beauty of art (even on a "kink site"). please continue to write and contribute to the site there are many that love your work. if i may a little request. the mindscaping parts are in my opinion the hottest parts your creativity and breakdown of the boys losing their will is very erotic and could be even longer and focused. there is the freedom of not being in reality that lets you do really anything. either way always excited for whats in store next.