Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/2/20, 9:32 PM
swizz your story is great. your writing is fantastic. and while the way you tell your story may not be the exact way i or someone else would picture or would have chosen thats the beauty of art (even on a "kink site"). please continue to write and contribute to the site there are many that love your work. if i may a little request. the mindscaping parts are in my opinion the hottest parts your creativity and breakdown of the boys losing their will is very erotic and could be even longer and focused. there is the freedom of not being in reality that lets you do really anything. either way always excited for whats in store next.
Anonymous
5/2/20, 9:09 PM
Looking forward to seeing where the next 5 charpters take us, I thought the majority of this would be looking at Chester but it seems like it has been closed out! Exciting to read when you post!
5/2/20, 9:04 PM
I loved it to death! Please continue this great story and your great work!
Ryan. R
5/2/20, 8:58 PM
Maybe anonymous needs to have a meeting with todd :p Yes I liked this chapter. In all honesty not my favourite but still a good read with some interesting ideas. Not every chapter is gana float everyone's boat and that is completely fine. Swizz one thing I want to say is that I think (and I think most people also have this opinion!) you do have well thought out stories and you do have substance in your writing! Thank you for writing this, it's very much appreciated!!
5/2/20, 8:58 PM
This may be one of my favorite chapters yet. I absolutely love the way that the pledges are fighting both the external threat of Carl and the internal threat of their desperate desire to submit. I would have th exact same dilemma, and I can’t wait to see all the hot things that happen next.
Ben
5/2/20, 8:38 PM
Mmhmm mmhmm mmhmm. I fully appreciate that you can have a different idea and different opinion and you don't always have to agree with everything that happens but I think calling someone who has put alot of effort into making numerous stories and chapters and calling it 'lazy' writing is perhaps the wrong word. 100% disagree and have your opinion but don't do it in a messy and disrespectful way. And equally give some construction criticism! Saying making a character that always wins is boring isn't helping anything.
Swizzington
5/2/20, 8:36 PM
Thank you for your kind words everybody. It helps me stay motivated :-)
transformheaven
5/2/20, 8:31 PM
putting out 8 parts of a story that are about 8000 words each... Yeah swizzington is such a lazy author T.T Of course you can have your criticism, dear anonymous writer. Wouldn't it be better if you brought it a bit more sympathetic though? Instead of just calling people lazy ;) Love this series Swizzington, can't wait to see where it ends!
Wp
5/2/20, 8:11 PM
This chapter does seem to have caused lots of friction between everyone. I think it was good and the play was a nice change - really enjoyed it! I'm looking forward to the next few chapters! Anonymous you are entitled to your own opinion and I believe that swizz is always open for constructive criticism. I don't think there is anything wrong with disagreeing with the story it's just how you convay your opinion. Equally this is just a fantasy kink site so there isn't going to be huge great big plot lines. It's all just for a bit of fun and some wanking material! It's not that serious!
5/2/20, 7:54 PM
So fucking hot how he isn't even aware that he can't stop himself, how Cody is in complete control and is gonna erase his entire identity and replace it with the smell of his feet and sweat. Can't wait to read more!