Recent Comments

5/2/20, 8:58 PM
This may be one of my favorite chapters yet. I absolutely love the way that the pledges are fighting both the external threat of Carl and the internal threat of their desperate desire to submit. I would have th exact same dilemma, and I can’t wait to see all the hot things that happen next.
Ben
5/2/20, 8:38 PM
Mmhmm mmhmm mmhmm. I fully appreciate that you can have a different idea and different opinion and you don't always have to agree with everything that happens but I think calling someone who has put alot of effort into making numerous stories and chapters and calling it 'lazy' writing is perhaps the wrong word. 100% disagree and have your opinion but don't do it in a messy and disrespectful way. And equally give some construction criticism! Saying making a character that always wins is boring isn't helping anything.
Swizzington
5/2/20, 8:36 PM
Thank you for your kind words everybody. It helps me stay motivated :-)
transformheaven
5/2/20, 8:31 PM
putting out 8 parts of a story that are about 8000 words each... Yeah swizzington is such a lazy author T.T Of course you can have your criticism, dear anonymous writer. Wouldn't it be better if you brought it a bit more sympathetic though? Instead of just calling people lazy ;) Love this series Swizzington, can't wait to see where it ends!
Wp
5/2/20, 8:11 PM
This chapter does seem to have caused lots of friction between everyone. I think it was good and the play was a nice change - really enjoyed it! I'm looking forward to the next few chapters! Anonymous you are entitled to your own opinion and I believe that swizz is always open for constructive criticism. I don't think there is anything wrong with disagreeing with the story it's just how you convay your opinion. Equally this is just a fantasy kink site so there isn't going to be huge great big plot lines. It's all just for a bit of fun and some wanking material! It's not that serious!
5/2/20, 7:54 PM
So fucking hot how he isn't even aware that he can't stop himself, how Cody is in complete control and is gonna erase his entire identity and replace it with the smell of his feet and sweat. Can't wait to read more!
Anonymous
5/2/20, 7:48 PM
love this story sm. if curtis and greg ever meet again maybe greg could be kinker? he was kinda vanilla before lol
Anonymous
5/2/20, 7:46 PM
I also disagree with the first comment. The last series was 10 chapters with real suspense as to who would win out. Now that we know the winner, the expectation is that it is reversed in the opening chapters of this series? I like a lot of different stories including many that are heavy on descriptions and light on plot, but given how few writers go for multichapter series (let alone a sequel), I always fine it a delight when there is something new to read by Swizzington.
Anonymous
5/2/20, 7:39 PM
Actually no to all of the above. Hi Anonymous again here. I have read fully the first story when it came out. I know the history and what all is going on. It just seems redundant to just have a villain who consistently wins. Yall can praise the author as much as you like but it is lazy writing. It is my opinion and yall do not have to agree with it.
5/2/20, 7:31 PM
Anonymous commentor basically wants luke skywalker to beat darth vader in the first three minutes of the movie else he would get bored because the empire always wins