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Anonymous
5/2/20, 7:48 PM
love this story sm. if curtis and greg ever meet again maybe greg could be kinker? he was kinda vanilla before lol
Anonymous
5/2/20, 7:46 PM
I also disagree with the first comment. The last series was 10 chapters with real suspense as to who would win out. Now that we know the winner, the expectation is that it is reversed in the opening chapters of this series? I like a lot of different stories including many that are heavy on descriptions and light on plot, but given how few writers go for multichapter series (let alone a sequel), I always fine it a delight when there is something new to read by Swizzington.
Anonymous
5/2/20, 7:39 PM
Actually no to all of the above. Hi Anonymous again here. I have read fully the first story when it came out. I know the history and what all is going on. It just seems redundant to just have a villain who consistently wins. Yall can praise the author as much as you like but it is lazy writing. It is my opinion and yall do not have to agree with it.
5/2/20, 7:31 PM
Anonymous commentor basically wants luke skywalker to beat darth vader in the first three minutes of the movie else he would get bored because the empire always wins
5/2/20, 7:27 PM
This was an amazingly hot story and it would be amazing to see what happens next! Other ways Clark finds to humiliate Max while on calls with his co-workers and working him further into Phase Two! See how far he can go before he breaks
Anonymous
5/2/20, 7:19 PM
Love this!! And I agree: sooooooo well-written!
5/2/20, 7:11 PM
Dear Anonymous Commenter: That wasn't a very nice way of phrasing your criticism. Have you read Swizzington's other multi-part stories: "The How to be a Good Boy Handbook" and "Slave Academy?" They were absolutely full of twists and turns, and we never knew what the outcome was until the very end! The comments on the penultimate chapter of "Slave Academy" were full of people debating and guessing about what the ending could be. Swizzington, you write SUSPENSE stories, and establishing the villain's power is an important part of making that suspense! Plus, no one knows about the special glasses that Lane managed to steal, and since Todd was so nervous about Chester, that means he's not infallible. And if I know anything about Swizzington, it's that you never know what to expect. I know the rest will be amazing, Swizzington! Can't wait to read it! (P.S. I absolutely LOVED this chapter! I'm a big theatre nerd, so reading the "play" was hilarious. Plus Quincy is just my type of guy...) ;p
5/2/20, 6:55 PM
The writing is fantastic and I keep on loving that you're exploring both the dark and romantic facets of your world. I really sympathize with Greg - you've really developed him well.
Anonymous
5/2/20, 6:31 PM
What I find interesting is you can't seem to write a well thought out story. Yes the writing is good but in the end, theres no real substance to the story. I already hate Todd. Theres no need or reason to write a sequel if you are just going to rehash basically Todd winning and ruling over everything. It is not interesting nor does it make a good story. I know you are writing on a kink site but it seems like you are trying to make a good story. I just overall think the plot is weak. Make it a little interesting. A character that always wins is not interesting. Actually it gets boring after reading that chapter after chapter. I guess we will have to see what you do with the rest of the sequel but I hope its better than what is currently being released.