Recent Comments

5/2/20, 6:55 PM
The writing is fantastic and I keep on loving that you're exploring both the dark and romantic facets of your world. I really sympathize with Greg - you've really developed him well.
Anonymous
5/2/20, 6:31 PM
What I find interesting is you can't seem to write a well thought out story. Yes the writing is good but in the end, theres no real substance to the story. I already hate Todd. Theres no need or reason to write a sequel if you are just going to rehash basically Todd winning and ruling over everything. It is not interesting nor does it make a good story. I know you are writing on a kink site but it seems like you are trying to make a good story. I just overall think the plot is weak. Make it a little interesting. A character that always wins is not interesting. Actually it gets boring after reading that chapter after chapter. I guess we will have to see what you do with the rest of the sequel but I hope its better than what is currently being released.
Anonymous
5/2/20, 6:22 PM
Loved the use of feet to bring him deeper!
Cumguts
5/2/20, 5:11 PM
this was great! easily one of my new faves. mymy only constructive criticism is that some parts could use more detailed sensory description just for the sake of eroticism lmao I'd love to see more booty growth fiction from you! :D
Anonymous
5/2/20, 4:57 PM
Loved it! Original and sexy!
5/2/20, 4:51 PM
Just keeps getting better!
5/2/20, 4:50 PM
Glad to see this series being continued. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Anonymous
5/2/20, 4:07 PM
Love nerd to jock transformation!!
5/2/20, 3:32 PM
wow this story is awesome i really liked it can't wait for another chapter 😉