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5/2/20, 7:31 PM
Anonymous commentor basically wants luke skywalker to beat darth vader in the first three minutes of the movie else he would get bored because the empire always wins
5/2/20, 7:27 PM
This was an amazingly hot story and it would be amazing to see what happens next! Other ways Clark finds to humiliate Max while on calls with his co-workers and working him further into Phase Two! See how far he can go before he breaks
Anonymous
5/2/20, 7:19 PM
Love this!! And I agree: sooooooo well-written!
5/2/20, 7:11 PM
Dear Anonymous Commenter: That wasn't a very nice way of phrasing your criticism. Have you read Swizzington's other multi-part stories: "The How to be a Good Boy Handbook" and "Slave Academy?" They were absolutely full of twists and turns, and we never knew what the outcome was until the very end! The comments on the penultimate chapter of "Slave Academy" were full of people debating and guessing about what the ending could be. Swizzington, you write SUSPENSE stories, and establishing the villain's power is an important part of making that suspense! Plus, no one knows about the special glasses that Lane managed to steal, and since Todd was so nervous about Chester, that means he's not infallible. And if I know anything about Swizzington, it's that you never know what to expect. I know the rest will be amazing, Swizzington! Can't wait to read it! (P.S. I absolutely LOVED this chapter! I'm a big theatre nerd, so reading the "play" was hilarious. Plus Quincy is just my type of guy...) ;p
5/2/20, 6:55 PM
The writing is fantastic and I keep on loving that you're exploring both the dark and romantic facets of your world. I really sympathize with Greg - you've really developed him well.
Anonymous
5/2/20, 6:31 PM
What I find interesting is you can't seem to write a well thought out story. Yes the writing is good but in the end, theres no real substance to the story. I already hate Todd. Theres no need or reason to write a sequel if you are just going to rehash basically Todd winning and ruling over everything. It is not interesting nor does it make a good story. I know you are writing on a kink site but it seems like you are trying to make a good story. I just overall think the plot is weak. Make it a little interesting. A character that always wins is not interesting. Actually it gets boring after reading that chapter after chapter. I guess we will have to see what you do with the rest of the sequel but I hope its better than what is currently being released.
Anonymous
5/2/20, 6:22 PM
Loved the use of feet to bring him deeper!
Cumguts
5/2/20, 5:11 PM
this was great! easily one of my new faves. mymy only constructive criticism is that some parts could use more detailed sensory description just for the sake of eroticism lmao I'd love to see more booty growth fiction from you! :D
Anonymous
5/2/20, 4:57 PM
Loved it! Original and sexy!