Recent Comments

5/2/20, 1:48 PM
Thank you all for your feedback and ratings. It encourages me to write more. I have a lot more planned. would giving out my email address here be helpful for comments and feedback?
5/2/20, 1:26 PM
Really wish I could quit this series. The last chapter tore me up inside, and this one didn't help. It's a great story, but I was never the sadist that enjoyed hurting people who were good/pure. If Curtis was a psycho, I would have been loving this story. Please don't stop on my account, I'm sure many people do love it. Just makes my heart break a little is all.
5/2/20, 1:16 PM
hope this could be a series
5/2/20, 12:52 PM
excellent job on your first story
Anonymous
5/2/20, 11:26 AM
Still one of the stories I come back to every once in a while. Great job! I especially like the the changes to Jake and Jace. Their sex and epilogues are hot.
Ben
5/2/20, 11:14 AM
Yeah it definitely sounds like his glasses let him do something against the mind warpers!
5/2/20, 9:59 AM
I’m very intrigued and invested in this sequel! Great writing Swizz!(as usual) Poor Chester, each time he tries defiance it explodes on him cuz a third person :/ I’m really curious about what those glasses do; he called them protection but as soon as he had his failsafe he deliberately tried to confront a mind warper; maybe we learn it in his upcoming attitudinal realignment session
Anonymous
5/2/20, 9:38 AM
Amazing!! Thanks a lot ;) Looking forward to seeing the transformation of Steve!!
5/2/20, 8:51 AM
Three great stories. Good work!
Ben
5/2/20, 8:20 AM
Ahh classic cliff hanger!! Looking forward to reading the next few chapters! Well done on your final exam! Must be such a relief!! Thanks again for putting out such good work!