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Corinthian
5/2/20, 2:45 PM
This was a really hot story - a great ending (if it is the end?). Many thanks.
Wp
5/2/20, 2:35 PM
Gosh I was thinking this would never come out haha!! Looks like things will start to kick off in chapter 3!! Thanks as always, really do love your seires! And congratulations on finishing your studies!
Anonymous
5/2/20, 2:20 PM
Great story! wonder if in the world of neuromate Greg could be recruited into being drowned himself uf it meant being paired with curtis? that could be hot.
5/2/20, 1:48 PM
Thank you all for your feedback and ratings. It encourages me to write more. I have a lot more planned. would giving out my email address here be helpful for comments and feedback?
5/2/20, 1:26 PM
Really wish I could quit this series. The last chapter tore me up inside, and this one didn't help. It's a great story, but I was never the sadist that enjoyed hurting people who were good/pure. If Curtis was a psycho, I would have been loving this story. Please don't stop on my account, I'm sure many people do love it. Just makes my heart break a little is all.
5/2/20, 1:16 PM
hope this could be a series
5/2/20, 12:52 PM
excellent job on your first story
Anonymous
5/2/20, 11:26 AM
Still one of the stories I come back to every once in a while. Great job! I especially like the the changes to Jake and Jace. Their sex and epilogues are hot.
Ben
5/2/20, 11:14 AM
Yeah it definitely sounds like his glasses let him do something against the mind warpers!
5/2/20, 9:59 AM
I’m very intrigued and invested in this sequel! Great writing Swizz!(as usual) Poor Chester, each time he tries defiance it explodes on him cuz a third person :/ I’m really curious about what those glasses do; he called them protection but as soon as he had his failsafe he deliberately tried to confront a mind warper; maybe we learn it in his upcoming attitudinal realignment session