Recent Comments

5/2/20, 12:52 PM
excellent job on your first story
Anonymous
5/2/20, 11:26 AM
Still one of the stories I come back to every once in a while. Great job! I especially like the the changes to Jake and Jace. Their sex and epilogues are hot.
Ben
5/2/20, 11:14 AM
Yeah it definitely sounds like his glasses let him do something against the mind warpers!
5/2/20, 9:59 AM
I’m very intrigued and invested in this sequel! Great writing Swizz!(as usual) Poor Chester, each time he tries defiance it explodes on him cuz a third person :/ I’m really curious about what those glasses do; he called them protection but as soon as he had his failsafe he deliberately tried to confront a mind warper; maybe we learn it in his upcoming attitudinal realignment session
Anonymous
5/2/20, 9:38 AM
Amazing!! Thanks a lot ;) Looking forward to seeing the transformation of Steve!!
5/2/20, 8:51 AM
Three great stories. Good work!
Ben
5/2/20, 8:20 AM
Ahh classic cliff hanger!! Looking forward to reading the next few chapters! Well done on your final exam! Must be such a relief!! Thanks again for putting out such good work!
5/2/20, 7:47 AM
hope you continue it!!
5/2/20, 6:55 AM
I'm so happy with the response to this story! Especially from the ScreamingMoist, who was one of my biggest inspirations for this work. I've never written fiction before, in fact I had to look up how to properly format dialogue before I started this, so I'm very happy that people seem to like it. I hadn't initially though about returning to this universe, but maybe I'll have to give it some thought. Regardless of a sequel, I've got lots of other ideas and definitely intend to keep writing!
Anonymous
5/2/20, 6:42 AM
ready for more this is getting good