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Apr 19, 2010
Hornycub
12/20/24, 5:17 PM
This would have been a perfect work if it wasn't for the stupid mom murder out of nowhere
12/20/24, 5:09 PM
Fuck me! I love this cum craving Venom far better than the movie one. I hope he turns out Bret into an enthusiastic willing cumdump. Hot work as always Jack Parker. Any relation to Peter?
12/19/24, 11:48 PM
it was hard to follow in places

12/20/24, 4:50 PM
@[BigMetalHusband](/user/show/10003859) Thank you for letting me know about this. Can you please be more specific so I may try to fix it?
12/20/24, 3:55 PM
Such a great addition, Jack! I’m very excited to find out what happens next to Buck… AND his dad!
Tanner
12/20/24, 3:13 PM
I wonder where little Billy goes from here. Poor guy. His wife won’t be pleased. He might be better off without his bush so everyone could see his tiny penis in all its glory.
12/20/24, 2:33 PM
i love when his hot breath was close to his face... omgosh...i love your writing. Where can i read more and more of your stories.?
Tanner
12/20/24, 2:25 PM
So good!!!
12/20/24, 2:03 PM
WOW! That was just so exciting. The green eyes... the references to the smells of men... the blonde hair providing influence on the boy... WHAT A GREAT STORY. Thank you
Dec 20, 2024
12/20/24, 9:02 AM
Hot, love the writing.

Pcm
12/20/24, 10:24 AM
@Flamefox23 Thank you!
5/21/23, 9:52 PM
The concept's good, and the writing's good. It feels a bit rushed though. I hope we see more from you, and I hope it's a bit more drawn out. Just so you can really get into the groove of these changes.

Majin Charles
5/21/23, 10:18 PM
@[Lancelot](/user/show/127419) really appreciate the criticism, i definitely agree in hindsight! there's a lot more i could've (and should've) gotten into... there's always next time, i suppose. shall definitely be posting more, thanks!

12/20/24, 8:26 AM
@Majin Charles Well, I swooped back around. Still love the concept and the writing. Kinda sad to see nothing more ever cropped up here from you. Really hoping that someday changes. Or you mention if you're posting somewhere else.