Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/1/20, 4:16 PM
This was one of the first stories I read on the old 'NCMC'. I got hard reading it then and I got hard re-reading now. Great story. So hot!!!
5/1/20, 3:31 PM
I was sold as soon as Jason was forced to sniff that armpit. I'm a real sucker for sexy armpits and this story did not disappoint. Real hot story man! Congratz on your first story, you did amazing!
5/1/20, 3:07 PM
Well written. Very polished and an interesting idea.
5/1/20, 2:45 PM
love the concept, hot story
screamingmoist
5/1/20, 1:16 PM
Stellar! Creepy, lost civilizations and a deep dive into the real world aftermath of some dramatic physical changes? More, please!
boywhowrites
5/1/20, 12:27 PM
Thank you! And I'm glad to hear it :)
Anonymous
5/1/20, 11:44 AM
Amazing! You weave a fantastic story. Gonna read chapter 2 now :)
5/1/20, 11:00 AM
cant wait for the next part
5/1/20, 9:08 AM
I found the writing a little overly wordy in places, especially where you re-explain a lot of the hero's thoughts or zip back and forth with all his mind changes. In some places it suited his character as an over thinker, and I laughed out loud at some of the stuff going on in his head, but in other places it was frustrating and diluted the pace of the story telling. The DVD stuff was an inspired touch, definitely a highlight of fictional intrigue. Good work.
ThatOneGuy
5/1/20, 7:22 AM
Damn! First story, seriously??? I loved it and made a mess :p