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5/1/20, 12:02 AM
I don't think I'll be doing a sequel to this one. It's ScreamingMoist's universe, he just let me play in it.
RoboticXperiment03
4/30/20, 11:36 PM
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Anonymous
4/30/20, 10:46 PM
wonderful
Anonymous
4/30/20, 10:09 PM
Hey, what about the next chapter?
4/30/20, 9:50 PM
Really great story. Writing was great hot topics brilliant job look forward to more.
4/30/20, 8:59 PM
EXCELLENT. just what I wanted. You have characterization and build up. Teasing and setting complete with character and the perspective of those involved as I anticipate the meaning and the change. Just going through Needful things by Stephen King really reminded me of the more...naughty and evocative parts (people with alternate sides, families disrupted by unchecked desires or screw ups, a manipulative iago/svengali figure) All I can complain about is wanting more. Getting a feel for this. The change not quite physical as emotional and mental hinting as it unleashing but mainly that the Mind controlling is creating his beastly dom. I want to see just what the Pastor is unleashing. Is it just repression or rewrite, a confusing mix of both? Thank you for sharing. This is what been asking for an wanted.
Corinthian
4/30/20, 8:48 PM
Another chapter - yes please!!
Anonymous
4/30/20, 8:46 PM
Yes I am very excited! Bitting at the bit to read the next installments. Another exciting chapter!
LongtimeFan
4/30/20, 7:59 PM
Now THIS is a story! Absolutely amazing writing, fascinating characters (including some bisexual representation!), strange but thrilling magic...you done good, Mr. Williams. :)
Dave Dastard
4/30/20, 7:52 PM
LOVE that the SA story is still going. Trying my best to wait patiently for the next installment.... dying to read more! Thanks, as always for sharing your fantastic stories with us, Swizzington. You're my fave!