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5/1/20, 11:00 AM
cant wait for the next part
5/1/20, 9:08 AM
I found the writing a little overly wordy in places, especially where you re-explain a lot of the hero's thoughts or zip back and forth with all his mind changes. In some places it suited his character as an over thinker, and I laughed out loud at some of the stuff going on in his head, but in other places it was frustrating and diluted the pace of the story telling. The DVD stuff was an inspired touch, definitely a highlight of fictional intrigue. Good work.
ThatOneGuy
5/1/20, 7:22 AM
Damn! First story, seriously??? I loved it and made a mess :p
5/1/20, 5:31 AM
please write more, SIR. i missed this last story i love everything you do (even if i dont understand your penchant for polo shirts) i love your dramatization of the control and your understanding of character and plot (a rarity on this site) quarantine crazy please SIR give me more
5/1/20, 4:48 AM
God, wish i have a slave like that :p
5/1/20, 3:18 AM
Rotherham man, Sure.. have at it. I'm glad I can inspire someone. I'd love to see someone elses take on this
Doug Kent
5/1/20, 3:03 AM
superb