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5/1/20, 2:53 AM
Such a well written and hot story!
5/1/20, 2:46 AM
loved the story.. wish you had extended it a bit to include details of him going under your control. also wish you had played with his triggers a bit more to show how he came to accept control over him
Swizzington
5/1/20, 2:32 AM
Chapter 2 has been submitted to the site. Awaiting approval now :-)
nycboot
5/1/20, 1:55 AM
Very nice and lots of fun. I wished the devil had appeared sooner (I love devils & demons!) but it's a very nice touch. Thank you!
5/1/20, 12:02 AM
I don't think I'll be doing a sequel to this one. It's ScreamingMoist's universe, he just let me play in it.
RoboticXperiment03
4/30/20, 11:36 PM
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Anonymous
4/30/20, 10:46 PM
wonderful
Anonymous
4/30/20, 10:09 PM
Hey, what about the next chapter?
4/30/20, 9:50 PM
Really great story. Writing was great hot topics brilliant job look forward to more.
4/30/20, 8:59 PM
EXCELLENT. just what I wanted. You have characterization and build up. Teasing and setting complete with character and the perspective of those involved as I anticipate the meaning and the change. Just going through Needful things by Stephen King really reminded me of the more...naughty and evocative parts (people with alternate sides, families disrupted by unchecked desires or screw ups, a manipulative iago/svengali figure) All I can complain about is wanting more. Getting a feel for this. The change not quite physical as emotional and mental hinting as it unleashing but mainly that the Mind controlling is creating his beastly dom. I want to see just what the Pastor is unleashing. Is it just repression or rewrite, a confusing mix of both? Thank you for sharing. This is what been asking for an wanted.