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HungryHungryHippo
4/30/20, 6:36 AM
Please make more ToT. if you dont ima be so sad lol
cavillager@gmail.com
4/30/20, 6:35 AM
Hey Draco! i would be so happy to buy you a coffee, but the odds on our living anywhere close to each other is pretty small. i live in NW Washington State. How about you? In the meantime though i do want to say how much i like the story, and even more than that i love the way you think! After reading this i am considering going out to buy a red Speedo and spend more time in fitting rooms and at the local YMCA. i am a big fan of mind control and a frequent hypnosis subject myself. i love stories which highlight the process of achieving hypnotic trance and mind control -- essentially the seduction of the submissive by the Dominant. The description of this process in this story is really vague, leading me to think that the mind control was achieved earlier than the story here started, and the aggressive smart guy was using a trigger word 'sub' to re-initiate trance. That kind of works for me, but of course omits the juicy description of that process of power exchange and increasing mind control that i so love to read about. i used to spend a lot of time with someone who was an English teacher and later a copy-editor, so i come naturally by my tendency to notice spelling and grammatical errors. The story has quite a number of minor errors, which caused me to re-read quite a few lines and were a little distracting. Most of the errors seem to involve the incorrect use of prepositions or errors in verb conjugation. Fortunately the story was so hot that i didn't allow it to slow me down very much. i might be willing to do some proof-reading for you if you like. However when it comes to having a kinky hot imagination for inventing plot, you are the Man! i'd love to say more but i have to go read another DracoBlaze story! Looking forward to seeing more chapters and other stories from you in the future.
Martin
4/30/20, 6:17 AM
***FUCK!*** What a hot story! This is becoming one of my new favorites here. I haven't read the third part yet, but the premise of this is just hitting all my buttons. And in this case, I love the perspective of both sides, being the one in control and the one controlled. Both points of views are extremely hot. I hope there are many more chapters to be read in this series!
4/30/20, 5:53 AM
A nerdy guy tops a bigger one, always a yes in my book. Thank you very much.
4/30/20, 5:36 AM
What a fucking pleasure to read. I LOVED the writing style.
4/30/20, 5:16 AM
Wasn't expecting Punks! haha. I **really** related to the beginning of this story. My personal life was SCARILY similar and I was nodding in agreement and laughing in some of the places. Watch out for the odd spelling/word fuck ups; it takes away from an otherwise good story. There are a handful of proof readers and editor knocking around on the GSS discord. Use 'em I say! (I had to learn this the hard way)
swngbthways
4/30/20, 4:39 AM
Like The Dirty Spiders said, it VERY MUCH hit everything for me too! I think THIS was INDEED a happy ending in EVERY level. 😉 BRAVO!
JMan (Honkycat)
4/30/20, 4:32 AM
What a great part 2. Well-written! Loved it.
4/30/20, 3:38 AM
please tell me you are continuing this!