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12/8/24, 4:36 AM
Was this ever continued? It's great!

12/20/24, 1:48 AM
@[Carpmr](/user/show/10054197) Hi! Well, as I mentioned at the end of the story, I didn't have a plan for this story to continue. That's why I publish it as a Community Story, so if other authors ever feel like they want to add their own chapter, they can. I guess no one was really interested :( I have a big backlog of stories I'm working, but if I think of a good idea for this, I will post another chapter. Or if you want to add your own, do it. I really like to read what others imagine for this.
Another fantastic story
12/20/24, 1:05 AM
Love this so far! Can't wait for the next chapter
Arthur
11/5/24, 2:31 PM
I also love this and I also wished it had more wedgies. This story is great. Please continue this story.

Anonymous
12/20/24, 12:19 AM
I love this
12/19/24, 10:37 PM
Thank you for sharing it!
hauntedestheart
12/19/24, 8:03 PM
Aw, that was sad! It's too bad they couldn't find a way to stay together. :(
12/19/24, 5:52 PM
As always. I liked Henry and Nick and wanted them to end up ok. Even if Henry was under nicks control most of the time. I hate that Nick is fully to blame for his downfall and I hope he can break free as tri hard and those guys are the well…bad guys! But I will say. That mind erasure part with Nick was amazing. Even if I hate to see Nick destroyed.

12/19/24, 6:21 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Thank you! If it's any consolation, while Nick's careless pride and other weaknesses led him to his doom here, let's not forget that Kurt is (as you put it) a bad guy. Nick was tricked and manipulated while his ego only served to make it easier to control him; he was simply beaten by a man who fought smarter. I'm glad you enjoyed the mind erasure and I hope you like what comes next,...
Aerium
12/19/24, 6:53 AM
My guilty pleasure is coming back to this story to see if it's somehow updated, still hoping tbh
12/19/24, 4:23 AM
I have come back to this one a few times now.
Anonymous
12/18/24, 11:54 PM
Ohhh, love it!! I love the dumbing down in this chapter. I would just like to suggest you two things, if you allow me: first, keep the contractions consistent for Andy/Nick in his dumb mental state, like speaking in “wanna,” “dunno,” “yer,” “doin’ " or “yessir". That makes him sound stupidier. And number two: As for his uniform, perhaps it could be a bit more sexualized than just the collar, like what you did with Freedog, but something different to not repeat it. I mean, I love the collar, but maybe he could wear something else, like rubber bracelets? Thigh-high rubber boots? Skin-tight rubber gloves? A rubber wrestling singlet? Or the rubber dog tail for the announced walk through the streets in previous chapters? I don't know, those are just some suggestions. I don't want to mess with your plans, your story is quite hot already I’m intrigued to see if Nick will fully become either stupid jock Andy, or if he will be back to be Nick. Or maybe he'sll be stuck somewhere in between? He will become some kind of “Andick?”

12/19/24, 12:57 AM
@Anonymous Ah, thank you! Glad you liked it! You bring up a few points that I'd love to talk further about. (And never worry about 'suggestions'! I love to read them, even when people guess too closely to what I plan to do,... _you all know who you are!_) First, let's get the 'uniform' out of the way,... don't worry, the current version isn't the finished article. Kurt just called it that as a way of pouncing on Nick's reeling mind, making him actually look at himself and what he was becoming. I've got a couple of specific ideas for the near future (one notably _less_ kinky, but you'll see why), but I'm looking at the list you've thrown together and I can see it unfolding too easily,... ;) And, second,... Nick's dumbing down! I'm glad you like the change in his speech and I plan to keep Nick like that when he is thinking for himself (shh! Don't tell him that's what he's doing!). When it's Nick having to work things out for himself,... what words to use, what the answer is meant to be,... I plan to keep him like that. However, he wasn't speaking like that during Kurt's little performance at the end. Nick's mental link to his brother cultists and Kurt CAN feed him the answers he needs to speak more clearly, but without their help he's just a dumb jock with an extra-empty head!

Anonymous
12/19/24, 3:11 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Thanks for your reply! I look forward to seeing what the future holds for the heroes! You're very good at dumbing down. I'm just realizing I never told you, but my favorite chapter of "The Training of Duty Boy" was the bad ending 2, with the two heroes turned into a couple of idiotic cavemen. I've reread it many times and I still find it as hot as the first time I read it. I love that they're so stupid they even altered their names to Neek and Heny, probabbly that's why I always forgot to leave a comment, LOL.

12/19/24, 3:36 AM
@Anonymous Boy, was that a divisive entry! I'm certain that it's some people's most disliked chapter, but I'm happy to hear someone has the opposite opinion! Thanks :D
12/18/24, 9:19 PM
It's always good reading how a muscle jock gets taken down. Reading how they become such sluts always gets me going. He has his new role, and his new mindset. He just needs his new 'uniform'. Really drive home the function of his new role. And there is no going back for him. It's very clear that anyone who gets that brainwashed doesn't come back together all the way. It's kinda poetic how he can likely be like Henry's dad now. Despite how Nick used him. I was surprised how you handled the dilemma between Kurt and Tri-Hard. Personally, I was expecting the later to use H-3 tech to make a new body for himself. Yet what happened was so much better. And much more into his personality and style to just use others. Its pretty convenient for him to just jump between bodies as he needs. Though this makes me wonder if this is how he is ultimately beaten. I'm some respects, he is an artificial parasite. What's stopping there heroes from reading him like that? And I keep enjoying the distinction between Hank and Tri-Hard. How one just wants slaves and drones as mindless and disposable tools. While the other has a now personal connection and wants to take his time in making his slaves and pups. Two different facets of the same 'kink'. And to that, will Hank look for those two favorites of his from the last series?

12/19/24, 12:39 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) You know, I was just about to reply to your comment about Hank's vs **Tri-Hard's** styles when I realized I was thinking about the contents of the _next_ chapter,... :shushing_face: Shh! None of THAT comes up! But, yes, Hank stands firmly in contrast to **Tri-Hard** in regards to 'slaves' and 'drones'. This is true of Ernst, of course, but also of Kurt and **H-3**. Kurt, as the NEW **Tri-Hard**, has become a fusion of his own desires and need for validation, while also inheriting the legacy of the original **Tri-Hard** and the twisted 'Evil Nick' personality he'd helped to create. All three of these merged personalities have no issues with treating people as tools (and it's not like pre-Henry Nick was any different; the 'evil' just helps!) As for the REAL Nick, he's kinda fucked now! He doesn't even know how much of his memory he wiped, so putting it back together would be impossible for him! No, everything in his head leads right back to Kurt and reinforces Nick's dependency on his new MASTER. It doesn't help the poor guy that he is infatuated with his new master, something I haven't explicitly gone into. Nick's ideal 'type' is a slightly older, stronger and attractive man (he wants a Daddy!), hence his slight obsession with Henry's dad, Carl, and why he often ends up like he does at the end of the 'Bad End' chapters! Of course, being a closeted jock in college, Nick couldn't pursue his 'ideal' man out of fear of rejection and isolation. Instead he settled for 'easier prey' and enjoyed the power he could exude over hot, yet weaker boys. Eventually that ends with Henry who was both weaker than Nick and a whole lot stronger! Well, there you go. If I haven't responded to any part of your comment, feel free to read into that intentional silence,... :p Thank you!