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Apr 22, 2020
nycboot
4/29/20, 10:50 PM
Nice story - but I agree with the unnamed commenter who suggested Chicago Manual of Style. You can read that but much better is Strunk's "The Elements of Style" - whose first chapter is on the comma and its frequent misuse. This it not to nitpick, but to improve on the talent you already have. So why not make it better? Good luck.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
4/29/20, 10:49 PM
I wish I had a room mate like that, awesome guy!
4/29/20, 10:22 PM
Oh wow, didn't expect that. I was hoping the MC wouldnt be caught...
4/29/20, 10:14 PM
Did anyone else loved the part where Daniels sleep-fucked the shit out of him? I was actually glad that the MC got choked and passed out as it will want him to try this out more. You're doing a great job dude! Such a great author.
nycboot
4/29/20, 10:02 PM
Whoa! What a great set up! Yes, please do more and thank you!
Sexcrab
4/29/20, 9:53 PM
This is a great series, very well written and everything, but I'm dropping here. I recognize the qualities of this story, but straight alpha male is not my thing, I like my males being used and abused, even against their will (although I prefer them happy). So, unless Daniels is (again) doped and tied up and have his body and dick used by the protagonist, while the last confesses everything he has already done to the str8 hunk and announces that he will publish all the videos he already done in all porn sites. So everyone will know the prized alpha male that Daniels really is, BWAWAHAHAAHAHHH! (sorry, I was excited). Anyway, I don't think this will happen so I'm dropping the story here. Best wishes.
nycboot
4/29/20, 9:52 PM
Short and sweet" as they say. :)
4/29/20, 9:34 PM
Oh wow this is really getting good. I love the teasing that he did to Daniels. I wonder what MC will do to him as he sleeps!
4/29/20, 9:32 PM
Great idea!
4/29/20, 9:27 PM
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