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4/29/20, 9:32 PM
Great idea!
4/29/20, 9:27 PM
I'd like to let all readers know that they're in luck! I'm now accepting commissions to write new branches of Ass Assassin! Want to read one of the unwritten story branches but don't feel confident in your writing ability? Never fear! For $30, I'll write you any failure ending you choose (provided its 3000 words or fewer). For $50, I'll write you a new non-failure story path! (5000 words or fewer). I thank all the readers who've supported the series thus far: here's a way to chip in and make the story even more expansive! Contact me on Patreon or through the GSS Discord if you'd like to purchase a commission.
Ryan. R
4/29/20, 9:11 PM
Ahh not to worry! It's nice meeting new victims as well!
4/29/20, 8:55 PM
Wow, this chapter was such a tease. Although i feel like if the main char wants to frustrate Daniels, he would want him from stopping to ejaculate so that hes more frustrated than ever
Swizzington
4/29/20, 8:53 PM
I wouldn't be so quick to jump to conclusions, nycboot! :-)
4/29/20, 8:45 PM
so fucking hot. i love how much control he takes, so damn good
4/29/20, 8:43 PM
An exciting start! Can't wait to read the rest!
4/29/20, 8:42 PM
I like the premise of this story so far. Bit of a late comer here so I will have to quickly catch upmwith the other chapters. But the first chapter got me excited for more. Great job!
nycboot
4/29/20, 8:19 PM
Thanks for starting a new series....but... At least you know what the reader experiences when you put words into our mouths: "This place is some sort of fascist dystopia!" I can see from others that to them it's exciting. To me, it's kinda like water going down the drain - it may take some time to get there, but eventually it's gone. So too with this premise - we know already that Lane is going to get an attitude adjustment. Unless Todd deservingly gets his skull smashed in, everything seems a foregone conclusion. Maybe you'll surprise us with something other than the inevitable?
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
4/29/20, 8:08 PM
I am going to make these suggestions to my dentist & his oralface, err office.