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12/18/24, 9:19 PM
It's always good reading how a muscle jock gets taken down. Reading how they become such sluts always gets me going. He has his new role, and his new mindset. He just needs his new 'uniform'. Really drive home the function of his new role. And there is no going back for him. It's very clear that anyone who gets that brainwashed doesn't come back together all the way. It's kinda poetic how he can likely be like Henry's dad now. Despite how Nick used him. I was surprised how you handled the dilemma between Kurt and Tri-Hard. Personally, I was expecting the later to use H-3 tech to make a new body for himself. Yet what happened was so much better. And much more into his personality and style to just use others. Its pretty convenient for him to just jump between bodies as he needs. Though this makes me wonder if this is how he is ultimately beaten. I'm some respects, he is an artificial parasite. What's stopping there heroes from reading him like that? And I keep enjoying the distinction between Hank and Tri-Hard. How one just wants slaves and drones as mindless and disposable tools. While the other has a now personal connection and wants to take his time in making his slaves and pups. Two different facets of the same 'kink'. And to that, will Hank look for those two favorites of his from the last series?

12/19/24, 12:39 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) You know, I was just about to reply to your comment about Hank's vs **Tri-Hard's** styles when I realized I was thinking about the contents of the _next_ chapter,... :shushing_face: Shh! None of THAT comes up! But, yes, Hank stands firmly in contrast to **Tri-Hard** in regards to 'slaves' and 'drones'. This is true of Ernst, of course, but also of Kurt and **H-3**. Kurt, as the NEW **Tri-Hard**, has become a fusion of his own desires and need for validation, while also inheriting the legacy of the original **Tri-Hard** and the twisted 'Evil Nick' personality he'd helped to create. All three of these merged personalities have no issues with treating people as tools (and it's not like pre-Henry Nick was any different; the 'evil' just helps!) As for the REAL Nick, he's kinda fucked now! He doesn't even know how much of his memory he wiped, so putting it back together would be impossible for him! No, everything in his head leads right back to Kurt and reinforces Nick's dependency on his new MASTER. It doesn't help the poor guy that he is infatuated with his new master, something I haven't explicitly gone into. Nick's ideal 'type' is a slightly older, stronger and attractive man (he wants a Daddy!), hence his slight obsession with Henry's dad, Carl, and why he often ends up like he does at the end of the 'Bad End' chapters! Of course, being a closeted jock in college, Nick couldn't pursue his 'ideal' man out of fear of rejection and isolation. Instead he settled for 'easier prey' and enjoyed the power he could exude over hot, yet weaker boys. Eventually that ends with Henry who was both weaker than Nick and a whole lot stronger! Well, there you go. If I haven't responded to any part of your comment, feel free to read into that intentional silence,... :p Thank you!
Tanner
12/18/24, 4:55 PM
This story is just fantastic. Thanks for your amazing work.

Tucker Thanks for the kind words!
12/18/24, 10:58 PM
@Tanner

Tanner
12/18/24, 11:56 PM
@Tucker I can’t wait to see what happens next!
12/18/24, 11:45 PM
I do wish Jake was more deserving of forced TF. I mean if he was a homophobe or cruel guy it would be easier to enjoy. Great story. Keep writing.
Jeff
12/16/24, 5:32 AM
Nice work. Wanna be 'forcedfully' or 'trapped' by another guy on tht machine.
12/18/24, 4:34 PM
Yes , it is great work. Have you written any new chapters to this? Would love to see if Chris and or Bill woke up. And what about his boss checking in on hism with his new pants.
Anonymous
12/18/24, 4:05 PM
Arguably one of the best stories on the site. Top-tier writers are rare here, but you really know what you're doing. I like how the prose becomes more urgent and run-on during the sex. Very solid character development in so few words — I feel like I know cocky Suresh immediately.
HypnoMutt
12/18/24, 1:59 PM
Wow, what a ride. I was totally immersed in that world from jump and it lingers in the senses. I'll miss Pete's presence, like Seth's, and his sendoff hit hard, deep and profound. This is richly textured, high-quality writing that elevates the genre.

12/18/24, 2:22 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) thank you for your kind words. I know this writing is not 'traditional' for GSS, but I'm glad it's found a home here and a few folks are appreciating it. I've sketched out a third novella for our characters as well. things will get even more exciting (and darker) in the 3rd installment too. Stay tuned!
12/18/24, 11:47 AM
I had a feeling Alpha Pete was going to have to make the sacrifice play this time around. He was so upset about Seth doing it the last time. Curious to learn why exactly his sacrifice will propel Carlos to Alpha. A shame about Zack, too- Mullins will be devastated. But a wonderful chapter, nonetheless. Bravo!

12/18/24, 2:20 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) one more chapter to sew things up. Alpha Pete and Alpha Toddson's bargain will be explained. your comments mean a great deal to me. I'm glad this writing has found an audience.
12/18/24, 6:25 AM
Tri-Hard is back! Oh, poor Nick. He has completely become a toy of the cult. Will his dear Henry come to save him? Or did Nick turn Henry into a toy of the cult, just like him.

12/18/24, 12:35 PM
@[MCamateur](/user/show/10008998) Yeah, Nick has fallen a long way,... _but he mostly has himself to blame!_ Back when he first met Kurt, Nick was cocky and carelessly assumed that he was just as invincible inside peoples' heads as he was outside. When Kurt began to _worship_ him, Nick didn't doubt for a moment that it was for a good reason and allowed the man an opening to sneak deeper into his mind. Nick allowed his ego to blind him and bind him to Kurt's unfolding schemes for him, sinking deeper and deeper as he unknowingly handed more control over to a man with no powers. A part of Nick was never FULLY opposed to what was happening. If he was, Nick could have broken free with ease! Of course, it's way to late for that now! _Now he's too happy with what he has become!_ And, what about Henry? He has a lot on his plate right now,... Unlike with Nick and the _new_ **Tri-Hard**, he still has to worry about **H-3** and Hank as well! We'll have to see what happens there,...
12/18/24, 8:15 AM
Great chapter! Excited to read the next one!