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Aerium
12/19/24, 6:53 AM
My guilty pleasure is coming back to this story to see if it's somehow updated, still hoping tbh
12/19/24, 4:23 AM
I have come back to this one a few times now.
Anonymous
12/18/24, 11:54 PM
Ohhh, love it!! I love the dumbing down in this chapter. I would just like to suggest you two things, if you allow me: first, keep the contractions consistent for Andy/Nick in his dumb mental state, like speaking in “wanna,” “dunno,” “yer,” “doin’ " or “yessir". That makes him sound stupidier. And number two: As for his uniform, perhaps it could be a bit more sexualized than just the collar, like what you did with Freedog, but something different to not repeat it. I mean, I love the collar, but maybe he could wear something else, like rubber bracelets? Thigh-high rubber boots? Skin-tight rubber gloves? A rubber wrestling singlet? Or the rubber dog tail for the announced walk through the streets in previous chapters? I don't know, those are just some suggestions. I don't want to mess with your plans, your story is quite hot already I’m intrigued to see if Nick will fully become either stupid jock Andy, or if he will be back to be Nick. Or maybe he'sll be stuck somewhere in between? He will become some kind of “Andick?”

12/19/24, 12:57 AM
@Anonymous Ah, thank you! Glad you liked it! You bring up a few points that I'd love to talk further about. (And never worry about 'suggestions'! I love to read them, even when people guess too closely to what I plan to do,... _you all know who you are!_) First, let's get the 'uniform' out of the way,... don't worry, the current version isn't the finished article. Kurt just called it that as a way of pouncing on Nick's reeling mind, making him actually look at himself and what he was becoming. I've got a couple of specific ideas for the near future (one notably _less_ kinky, but you'll see why), but I'm looking at the list you've thrown together and I can see it unfolding too easily,... ;) And, second,... Nick's dumbing down! I'm glad you like the change in his speech and I plan to keep Nick like that when he is thinking for himself (shh! Don't tell him that's what he's doing!). When it's Nick having to work things out for himself,... what words to use, what the answer is meant to be,... I plan to keep him like that. However, he wasn't speaking like that during Kurt's little performance at the end. Nick's mental link to his brother cultists and Kurt CAN feed him the answers he needs to speak more clearly, but without their help he's just a dumb jock with an extra-empty head!

Anonymous
12/19/24, 3:11 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Thanks for your reply! I look forward to seeing what the future holds for the heroes! You're very good at dumbing down. I'm just realizing I never told you, but my favorite chapter of "The Training of Duty Boy" was the bad ending 2, with the two heroes turned into a couple of idiotic cavemen. I've reread it many times and I still find it as hot as the first time I read it. I love that they're so stupid they even altered their names to Neek and Heny, probabbly that's why I always forgot to leave a comment, LOL.

12/19/24, 3:36 AM
@Anonymous Boy, was that a divisive entry! I'm certain that it's some people's most disliked chapter, but I'm happy to hear someone has the opposite opinion! Thanks :D
12/18/24, 9:19 PM
It's always good reading how a muscle jock gets taken down. Reading how they become such sluts always gets me going. He has his new role, and his new mindset. He just needs his new 'uniform'. Really drive home the function of his new role. And there is no going back for him. It's very clear that anyone who gets that brainwashed doesn't come back together all the way. It's kinda poetic how he can likely be like Henry's dad now. Despite how Nick used him. I was surprised how you handled the dilemma between Kurt and Tri-Hard. Personally, I was expecting the later to use H-3 tech to make a new body for himself. Yet what happened was so much better. And much more into his personality and style to just use others. Its pretty convenient for him to just jump between bodies as he needs. Though this makes me wonder if this is how he is ultimately beaten. I'm some respects, he is an artificial parasite. What's stopping there heroes from reading him like that? And I keep enjoying the distinction between Hank and Tri-Hard. How one just wants slaves and drones as mindless and disposable tools. While the other has a now personal connection and wants to take his time in making his slaves and pups. Two different facets of the same 'kink'. And to that, will Hank look for those two favorites of his from the last series?

12/19/24, 12:39 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) You know, I was just about to reply to your comment about Hank's vs **Tri-Hard's** styles when I realized I was thinking about the contents of the _next_ chapter,... :shushing_face: Shh! None of THAT comes up! But, yes, Hank stands firmly in contrast to **Tri-Hard** in regards to 'slaves' and 'drones'. This is true of Ernst, of course, but also of Kurt and **H-3**. Kurt, as the NEW **Tri-Hard**, has become a fusion of his own desires and need for validation, while also inheriting the legacy of the original **Tri-Hard** and the twisted 'Evil Nick' personality he'd helped to create. All three of these merged personalities have no issues with treating people as tools (and it's not like pre-Henry Nick was any different; the 'evil' just helps!) As for the REAL Nick, he's kinda fucked now! He doesn't even know how much of his memory he wiped, so putting it back together would be impossible for him! No, everything in his head leads right back to Kurt and reinforces Nick's dependency on his new MASTER. It doesn't help the poor guy that he is infatuated with his new master, something I haven't explicitly gone into. Nick's ideal 'type' is a slightly older, stronger and attractive man (he wants a Daddy!), hence his slight obsession with Henry's dad, Carl, and why he often ends up like he does at the end of the 'Bad End' chapters! Of course, being a closeted jock in college, Nick couldn't pursue his 'ideal' man out of fear of rejection and isolation. Instead he settled for 'easier prey' and enjoyed the power he could exude over hot, yet weaker boys. Eventually that ends with Henry who was both weaker than Nick and a whole lot stronger! Well, there you go. If I haven't responded to any part of your comment, feel free to read into that intentional silence,... :p Thank you!
Tanner
12/18/24, 4:55 PM
This story is just fantastic. Thanks for your amazing work.

Tucker Thanks for the kind words!
12/18/24, 10:58 PM
@Tanner

Tanner
12/18/24, 11:56 PM
@Tucker I can’t wait to see what happens next!
12/18/24, 11:45 PM
I do wish Jake was more deserving of forced TF. I mean if he was a homophobe or cruel guy it would be easier to enjoy. Great story. Keep writing.
Jeff
12/16/24, 5:32 AM
Nice work. Wanna be 'forcedfully' or 'trapped' by another guy on tht machine.
12/18/24, 4:34 PM
Yes , it is great work. Have you written any new chapters to this? Would love to see if Chris and or Bill woke up. And what about his boss checking in on hism with his new pants.
Anonymous
12/18/24, 4:05 PM
Arguably one of the best stories on the site. Top-tier writers are rare here, but you really know what you're doing. I like how the prose becomes more urgent and run-on during the sex. Very solid character development in so few words — I feel like I know cocky Suresh immediately.
HypnoMutt
12/18/24, 1:59 PM
Wow, what a ride. I was totally immersed in that world from jump and it lingers in the senses. I'll miss Pete's presence, like Seth's, and his sendoff hit hard, deep and profound. This is richly textured, high-quality writing that elevates the genre.

12/18/24, 2:22 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) thank you for your kind words. I know this writing is not 'traditional' for GSS, but I'm glad it's found a home here and a few folks are appreciating it. I've sketched out a third novella for our characters as well. things will get even more exciting (and darker) in the 3rd installment too. Stay tuned!