Recent Comments

4/27/20, 11:27 PM
I can't believe how much I am turned on by these stories...god I want some daddy dick
HypnoAJL
4/27/20, 10:47 PM
Keep this kind of stuff coming! It's great!
Martin
4/27/20, 10:22 PM
The wrong order of the stories were my mistake, I'm sorry for that. It's fixed now, and all the parts are published now, too!
Anonymous
4/27/20, 10:18 PM
Great entrapment idea. Nice writing style. All in all you’re off to a great start. Really hope there’s more to come though, cos this cuts the story off faaaaar too soon!
4/27/20, 10:02 PM
Cyclops, It's your story and as long as you are happy with it that's all that matters. The scores are somewhat arbitrary so don't focus on that; I know that I got good scores for chapter 2 of my story and didn't for chapter 4, but it didn't matter to me as I know the story I want to tell and I'm telling it. So far you've been doing an excellent job as I quickly open the latest chapter whenever you put it up; if you need some encouragement about continuing, please use that to encourage yourself and keep writing. Please know that I at least enjoy your work and will be waiting for it whenever you put it up and I'll look forward to the story wherever you go with it.
Anonymous
4/27/20, 9:58 PM
Would love to give this a proper try as the Bat Family is a major button-press for me. But once I hit that giant wall of continuous text I started to get lost really quickly :( You’ve clearly got a lot of passion for this series given how many parts have gone up. If you went back and did some more editing to break that wall into paragraphs it would do wonders to the readability, and hopefully allow it to grab people’s attention better. On a side note, there’s something funky going on with how the chapters are being listed on the story page. The numbering is all over the place
Anonymous
4/27/20, 9:11 PM
So well written! Thanks for writing this
4/27/20, 8:42 PM
Ooh nice, very very nice, and sexy, very very nice and sexy. :)
4/27/20, 7:08 PM
@New Guy in Town -- I'm so sorry! I wasn't referring to your comment at all! I was sort of thinking out loud about the scores this one is getting. They're not bad, I'm just trying to respond to feedback from readers and wondering if I should keep going the direction I'm going. The story is pretty well finished in my head, but the effort of getting everything written down is taking more time than I planned :) First time posting here and maybe bit off more than I can chew. I'm really happy with how people have responded and love all the feedback, both positive and constructive. It's been great! Just not sure if/when I'll write more since I'm not sure if what I have next is what most people here want to read. Not complaining at all! Very happy that some folks have enjoyed this so far! Any criticism or suggestion or musing is very welcome!