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5/16/20, 2:49 AM
The nerdy son dominating his muscle dad in such humiliating and degrading ways is so hooot and the best. There should b mor of this
5/16/20, 2:34 AM
very intrigued by that ending!! season 2 can't come fast enough! I will say though that I'm kinda disappointed that butch having a pain kink, plus being handcuffed was not explored at all but only written about in the background. I wish you would have done more
MuscleTitLover
5/16/20, 2:29 AM
Don't worry about it. This chapter is still written pretty well! I loved how you're making this alpha, mountain of muscles slowly submitting to another man. Now, I wonder what other rings are left and what effects come with them.
5/16/20, 1:12 AM
Very good degradation. That's really hot, man. Against one's will humiliation is the best. Please make more of this!
5/16/20, 12:56 AM
Very cool. Loved it.
Anonymous
5/16/20, 12:38 AM
Great story, amazing work really! Even more amazing that it's a completed story! lol You're a great writer, you should think about posting to Amazon, or patreon.
Anonymous
5/16/20, 12:27 AM
By the way "strait" is a body of water. "Straight" is heterosexual.
5/15/20, 11:16 PM
excellent chapter..i have a guess about what your planning and cant wait to see of im right.
5/15/20, 11:08 PM
Truly excellent writing. I'm a big fan of big sub and hypno themes, and this was a cock-churning work!
5/15/20, 10:51 PM
Hello again! not worn out at all GoodTime! I'm more worried that you could became too bored to read me always commenting! It doesn't feel repetitive, because you're doing different ways to humiliate poor officer Huntly, so it works for me. If you want to expand the playground, you could try to change of setting, or go deeper in mind control, like modify memories, habits, or other people around him to further break his mind. But you're doing perfectly, from my point of view. I'm always happy to read the updates.