Recent Comments

4/27/20, 7:08 PM
@New Guy in Town -- I'm so sorry! I wasn't referring to your comment at all! I was sort of thinking out loud about the scores this one is getting. They're not bad, I'm just trying to respond to feedback from readers and wondering if I should keep going the direction I'm going. The story is pretty well finished in my head, but the effort of getting everything written down is taking more time than I planned :) First time posting here and maybe bit off more than I can chew. I'm really happy with how people have responded and love all the feedback, both positive and constructive. It's been great! Just not sure if/when I'll write more since I'm not sure if what I have next is what most people here want to read. Not complaining at all! Very happy that some folks have enjoyed this so far! Any criticism or suggestion or musing is very welcome!
EntrancedGay92
4/27/20, 5:53 PM
I love these kinds of stories and for one that you did quickly, it is great! I agree with Hypnothrill, I would enjoy a prequel detailing Jose's conversion and an eventual sequeal where the landlord is ensalve as well. Thanks for writing!
Anonymous
4/27/20, 5:39 PM
I love this!!
4/27/20, 5:28 PM
Very hot story. I'd love to see this continue.
4/27/20, 5:23 PM
That was the fastest power give up ever.
4/27/20, 4:34 PM
Thank you!
Anonymous
4/27/20, 3:17 PM
Whenever I come back and read this story I always wonder how the party went!!!
Wp
4/27/20, 3:17 PM
Thought I'd read these again. So am I right in thinking that this will be a direct carry on to the original series e.g. Slave academy 11, rather than a new a side story e.g. The adventures of Todd? Massively excited about this woohoo!
Anonymous
4/27/20, 2:57 PM
The ending felt abrupt, but I like it