Recent Comments

4/27/20, 2:52 AM
I fixed the confusing line. No matter how many times you proofread, sometimes a mistake creeps through. Thanks for the heads up.
4/27/20, 1:41 AM
@Cyclops: Don't get me wrong, I loved this section just like the other sections; just felt like just when we start to see Collin and how Right Control works, the section ends. It's your story and if it's taking you in a certain direction then you have to follow. I as the reader am only along for the ride; I go where you want me to go.
4/27/20, 1:37 AM
Danke für diese tolle Story, schön, auch was deutsches zu lesen hier. Ich hoffe, du hast noch lange Ideen und Lust zu Schreiben!
Anonymous
4/27/20, 12:04 AM
This was awesome! So hot 🔥🔥 I can't wait for the next one
4/26/20, 11:56 PM
very hot.
4/26/20, 11:37 PM
I liked this installment. Looking forward to more
Anonymous
4/26/20, 11:26 PM
How about some racial changes for the party? like when you mentioned 'Just imagine a guy getting transformed with a new middle eastern ethnicity and not speaking a word of English. Yeah, I might do that to someone'
4/26/20, 10:18 PM
Please finish the story off if you could.
4/26/20, 9:47 PM
I need more chapters. This was so hot to read.
4/26/20, 8:25 PM
Sometimes a story starts telling itself. In this case, I don't think this audience is gonna like where this story is going... People don't seem to like this installment too much, but it's indicative of where Colin and Hawk and Eagle are headed. I guess I'm more interested in writing about relationships than sex.