Recent Comments

4/26/20, 4:41 AM
This is so great! Keep it up! I love it so much.
4/26/20, 4:11 AM
This was great. I really loved that you explored the darker side of the neuromate as a piece of technology. It scratched a kinky aspect of mind control that really worked for me but in addition to that the contrast it showed between Brodie and Greg and their treatment of their sponsors also textured and made the Greg and Curtis relationship more meaningful. The emphasis that Greg places on consent and 'really' getting to know Curtis is deepened and made more interesting and complicated by seeing just how easily Brodie, or even Greg if he was minded to, can disregard those concerns completely. Hope that some of the darker and more exploitative aspects kept being explored in addition to Greg's more wary and gentle attitude (plus they're super hot). And I'd love to get more insight somehow into what Curtis was like before the procedure and how that guy might have felt about things, it would be interested to see exactly how far the neuromate is smoothing things over and how far it isn't. Especially since Greg had such a romantic ideal built on this young guy - a projection - without ever really knowing him. In my own mind Curtis must have been in pretty desperate straits, or dumber, or be more of a risk taker or self destructive than Greg realized to turn to this as a solution.
4/26/20, 3:37 AM
Sorry your story seems polarizing in regards to your readers' reactions depending on the inclusion of the whole 'diaper' aspect. Just wanted to let you know I love the story no matter where you take it!
4/26/20, 12:11 AM
Congrats on making this both funny and incredibly sexy. I think this is your best work on this site.
4/25/20, 11:26 PM
the story was awesome, you should continue it.
Swizzington
4/25/20, 11:10 PM
I don't know if anyone really checks this part of the comment section, but just in case, an update: I will be posting the first chapter of a Slave Academy sequel within the next day or two. (The Zeiss story is on hold for now)
Apr 8, 2014
4/25/20, 11:01 PM
Very good! I sense a lot of potential here. Keep up the good work!
4/25/20, 10:38 PM
This chapter felt a bit like a tease; I mean we do get to see Colin under right control and the beginning of his transformation, but it's just a slight glimpse. Right when we start to get somewhere, the chapter ends. It's the frustration of having to wait for the next chapter to learn more, which is a good thing in general. But please don't make us wait too long to see how Hawk changes Collin and how Collin changes.
Bimarguy
4/25/20, 8:51 PM
yes it is devilish , and short and sweet
4/25/20, 7:32 PM
nice. i wanna see the teacher make him into his own personal stud who lives to pleasure his ass, tongue and cock