Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/26/20, 11:26 PM
How about some racial changes for the party? like when you mentioned 'Just imagine a guy getting transformed with a new middle eastern ethnicity and not speaking a word of English. Yeah, I might do that to someone'
4/26/20, 10:18 PM
Please finish the story off if you could.
4/26/20, 9:47 PM
I need more chapters. This was so hot to read.
4/26/20, 8:25 PM
Sometimes a story starts telling itself. In this case, I don't think this audience is gonna like where this story is going... People don't seem to like this installment too much, but it's indicative of where Colin and Hawk and Eagle are headed. I guess I'm more interested in writing about relationships than sex.
Rodready
4/26/20, 7:20 PM
Just came back this one. Totally agree, this is still the best one ever from you.
Anonymous
4/26/20, 6:31 PM
is there more?
4/26/20, 5:48 PM
I love how they started referring to themselves in 3rd person after being taken over. 😈
4/26/20, 5:19 PM
wow thats a really good story.
Ryan. R
4/26/20, 4:20 PM
Ahh that's very exciting to hear!!! Amazing news I'm so looking forward to reading both of these! Especially the zeiss, it sounds like a monster to write though - thank you for keeping up with it!!
Anonymous
4/26/20, 3:33 PM
It's so satisfying to see an ethical dilemma resolved as I would have resolved it. I can think of several directions this could go including Greg receiving an implant to synch with Curtis.