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swngbthways
4/25/20, 4:32 PM
I would LOVE to see what follows next. I have some theories and hope of what would follow but I don't want to influence you either way and just see where you as the artist is taking this. I love the humanity of your characters, especially Greg. You definitely put me in his shoes. I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/25/20, 4:12 PM
First off, the writing is great and really hot. I like our main character, and the introduction of other NeuroMate users and contractees is interesting and opens up fun uses that might be a bit out of character for the protag. I could see Curtis ending up with Brodie, with maybe Brodie pushing Greg's boundaries OR him becoming an antagonist. Anyways I hope we see more of Brodie and his boy(s) too, what he's done with his Neuromate is interesting and I'm kinda interested in "Boy"'s circumstances as well. (That and Brodie seems particularly twisted so knowing what he gets up to when playing alone would be fun)
Anonymous
4/25/20, 3:58 PM
The only thing missing from this story were showtunes. LOL!! Yes, I agree. The power to control minds and better our world is a great fantsasy. I think the reason why stories on this site rarely go down that path is self-interest. Power allows us to feed our desires. Having things we can't have is a prime desire. As loving as our protagonist in this story is, when he uses his power, he is enforcing his prime desire -- gay, out and proud. Is is heartwarming? Yes. Is is la-la-land? Yes. Was the sex hot? YES. Keep writing. We read stories and novels to escape. This is a great escape.
4/25/20, 3:56 PM
I hope nothing bad happens with Curtis like getting Brodie as a new sponsor...
Anonymous
4/25/20, 3:43 PM
Devilish, as usual!!
4/25/20, 3:13 PM
No. I have some other stories. I don't know why but this series doesn't come up unless you're signed in. None of these stories have topics that would require safe mode. That's not my style.
Alex
4/25/20, 3:02 PM
**HOT!!!!** As always, the legendary Hyptrance is in fine form with this one! At its core, this tale is a twist on the delicious (and never stale) trope of a stage hypnotist gone rogue. Hyptrance artfully blends many elements to elevate this to a fresh story featuring his trademark **excellent** hypnotic induction scenes. (For me, these detailed inductions are always the sexiest parts of any of his works!) Here we meet two totally unsuspecting, college-aged brothers, including the slightly older and admirably protective "big bro". Will his instincts to guard his younger sibling be strong enough to resist the hypnotist's plans? Probably not, but you'll find out. Hyptrance rounds out the story with some steamy encounters with their neighbor, Mike, the friendly, fit, young cop who just moved in next door. He might just be the perfect new "friend" the brothers have been searching for, at the behest of the crafty hypnotist. I don't want to risk giving away any spoilers, so I'll leave the summary at that. Suffice it to say that you must check this one out ASAP! Hyptrance: If you happen to read this comment, just want to say I hope you are well. Thanks for this sizzling piece! Also, please gift us with another chapter to this story, if you are feeling inspired. :-) -- Alex
4/25/20, 2:38 PM
ahahahaha! the dialog at the beginning is absolute gold! please continue!
4/25/20, 1:51 PM
is the series over?
4/25/20, 1:15 PM
Your prose is really good and I love your characters! Greg's complicated feelings and Curtis' inability to give him the answers he wants is really, really interesting! Awesome sex scenes, too! Super hot! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Did he transfer ownership of the sponsorship to Curtis? What will happen when Curtis wakes up?!