Recent Comments

Moby
4/27/20, 3:30 AM
This is awesome! Can't wait to see more!
4/27/20, 2:52 AM
I fixed the confusing line. No matter how many times you proofread, sometimes a mistake creeps through. Thanks for the heads up.
4/27/20, 1:41 AM
@Cyclops: Don't get me wrong, I loved this section just like the other sections; just felt like just when we start to see Collin and how Right Control works, the section ends. It's your story and if it's taking you in a certain direction then you have to follow. I as the reader am only along for the ride; I go where you want me to go.
4/27/20, 1:37 AM
Danke für diese tolle Story, schön, auch was deutsches zu lesen hier. Ich hoffe, du hast noch lange Ideen und Lust zu Schreiben!
Anonymous
4/27/20, 12:04 AM
This was awesome! So hot 🔥🔥 I can't wait for the next one
4/26/20, 11:56 PM
very hot.
4/26/20, 11:37 PM
I liked this installment. Looking forward to more
Anonymous
4/26/20, 11:26 PM
How about some racial changes for the party? like when you mentioned 'Just imagine a guy getting transformed with a new middle eastern ethnicity and not speaking a word of English. Yeah, I might do that to someone'
4/26/20, 10:18 PM
Please finish the story off if you could.
4/26/20, 9:47 PM
I need more chapters. This was so hot to read.